The second rise of a Villain

Amazing book. Expecting an update soon.

I'm not a gamer so usually reading books about system and stuff don't make sense to me. overall the story is good and like the way it progresses

Only giving this novel a 5 star because the protagonist is named Fang Yuan from Reverend InsanityStill cry myself to sleep every night after it went on hiatus

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Structural Improvements,it takes baby steps to reach big steps. Work on capitalizing your sentences, ie, dialogue."He stood, staring into the empty room known as the abyss room. He wondered if he could ever see the light of day after being trapped here for a century."That's a example I came up with in less than a minute, theres some mistakes but its generally what you want to aim for in your next chapters. Description and details need to also be improved upon.

I have read books but believe when I say this particular one has a unique taste to it. The plot development is creative and intriguing. I love this so much, great job author!