Although the idea originates from other similar novels. But it has its unique story. Instead of helping the original protagonist or making the original protagonist talented. This novels starts with the original hero as a weak person. An interesting read. Looking forward to the updates.
Nice stuff
So childish, I enjoyed a lot RWTSS but this one nope. The novel it's good, don't misunderstand me but again I feel I am reading a story for childs and this William compared with the other one is worst.
I despise people who write a good review before even reading a novel, but now I have to do it too. To be fair I won't give it a five.Anyways, you deserve a 4-star, just by having a single fl, not having a harem is already a rare occurrence lol. I'll write a normal review later after reading some chapters, maybe after 50.
I really would like to read more after chapter 30. Something ominous seems to be lurking in the background. Vivshi is gonna go through revolution.
This is really an enjoyable story to read I cant wait for more thank you very much for your hard work :)
Lazy writing with countless mistakes. Obvious that English isn't the author's first language. Information/exposition dumped unskilfully from the onset of the story instead of lightly sprinkled throughout the beginning of the story ruining any chance of blooming a sense of intrigue. Horrible naming sense such as the beast continent named Bestia etc. Extremely clichéd, archetypal characters, where the pretty girl takes interest on the MC for nothing worth mentioning. Guns is a magical world as marginal originality in an otherwise completely original story base. Also the character descriptions are very thorough but bland. MC doesn't start as overpowered but it's painfully obvious that he will be soon so say goodbye to any tension that could have been bred.
I feel like this could be a gem if the author plays his cards right.
Characters are fun, stability of updates is great, but the writing can be chaotic sometimes to the point that I don't really know what's going on.
Especially during POV changes.
But hey nobody is perfect, right? So dear author I would recommend getting an editor because this novel has a LOT of potential and chaotic writing may scare potential readers away.
Much love! ♥
Binged this original after it came out from my recommendations list and I was caught - hook, line and sinker, for its seriously awesome plot. Finally, a novel where I can spend my passes (lol)
Writing - I know the author isn't a professional, but this book feels like it was written by a pro. The quality of the writing is beyond any webnovel I've read, or maybe I'm a bit biased in saying that, because I'm a sucker for Sherlock-inspired works (I get your references haha I'm proud of myself)
Stability - it's really steady! Keep it up!
Development - as I said, the plot is seriously awesome. But what's more amazing is how the story progressed as more and more pieces fit into its puzzle. And sht, I had several moments too that got me at the edge of my seat (or bed) and I'm like "noooo..... oh-ok *sigh*" wew
Characters - SS-tier writing and descriptions again! I vibe so much with Levi and Sam! I came here for them, and will stay here for them
An American setting written by a dumb*ss with no understanding of America. The author has a low a low IQ primarily used to simp after women and each chapter causes the average reader not used to MTL to want to jump of the golden gate bridge after cutting the net they set up to stop people from killing themself.
Honestly this novel is basically similar to any Xianxia novel you will read.
Now before you guys start flaming me saying it's video-game and all, with monster mc etc etc, listen first.
1. The MC is underdog, poor.
2. Smart but stepped on always.
3. Topper but looses his seat to some guy who uses has more money.
4. Father is useless and mc need to earn money in his stead to pay exhorbant loan.
5. Basically chooses options with quickest path to power.
6. System that is basically cultivation with the name evolution given.
7. Mc killls all player except 2, why one is innocent you child, umm OK maybe and her sister who is very pritty, while he happy to kill all others.
8. Extremely selfish.
9. No long sighted vision.
10. Never uses his gift perfectly, ways that are obvious to all.
How much more would you like to read.
11. Oh and he is the only one to get quest for endgame items at the very starting of the game.
Now you guys can continue you flaming if you would like to.
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