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To be honest, I found this novel pretty good at the beginning, but it went downhill very fast. I still perseviered until chapter 180+, but then I gave up. One point is indeed the massive nationlism, which would not be too bad as most chinese novels have a good amount. The main issue is that in this novel its unbearable for me. (note that I am not from the US)
The other thing is the MC whose character is all over the place, like there is not one, but at least 10 different people. His thinking is massively different then the background story show us. He is someone who spent most of his live (or thats how it seems) in hospital bad and then dies. He missed many things in life. He also said he wants to enjoy his new life the fülledt, he do not want to die. That could generate a cowardly MC, with possible character development as time goes on. But that is not the case. The MC is doing nothing, that could count as enjoying life. No traveling, getting friends, partying, or (god forbid) getting a woman. He does nothing at all, except reading, eating and sleeping. That what the hospital should have looked like no? Time to time the author tries to throw us some bones like, "I am handsome, I have time to have a girfriend", but not actively looking for a woman and avoiding woman as a plague is 2 very different things. Also he is inconsistent in his decisions without any narrative why did he make those. The characters are all over the place, not well thought out and empty most of the time. The writing itself is far from bad and there is a semi-decent world building as well, but most of the time I think the author is at most 10-12 years old with no life experience at all. And my biggest problem is that I absolutely can not relate to the MC in any way. Not with his thinking, decisions and most of the time not even his plans, other then wanting to become stronger. At the end he is an idiotic child with a massive strenght. The worst kind.
Biased review. Currently i like these types of novels so I'll support it. it's nothing great and nothing bad, it just suited my taste. The mc isn't particularly stupid but he's not a genius either however not so much in a way that's it's noticeable, he's just an ordinary person with a cheat I guess.
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up to around ch 50 the story was ok then took a nosedive into the trash. early on the mc has a talk with his 300 yo sect master about the concept of cultivation. fee chapters later there are hundreds of people under 20 who are high level cultivators. it's like he started writing a different novel a few chapters in.
MC is incredibly dense and the system seems to have disappeared.
he looks down on the cultivators then gets scared by every old man he meets thinking they are an expert
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I recommend this book to anyone looking for good summoning/monster-raising books. If you liked "Monster Pet Evolution" then that book is for you. The book also contains nice subtle humor. Also the book has no racism. I want this picked up. [img=recommend]
Main character's cheat is completely broken so he need to put in effort to grow (and partially due to his cheat he need to put more of it). The translation quality and editing is good! A rare find among trial read books.
The MC isn't an idiot and definitely isn't a paragon of justice but also isn't outright bad - he will help innocent people but he can also kill people.
Concept of city being transported to another world isn't really original but here it's done decently.
But there are also bad things:
-one plothole that maybe will be explained in the future
-in first 7 chapter there were to sentences that were nationalistic in nature, one of those from a certain perspective could be quite funny
-it did mention capitalist (captilist not capitalism) 3 times I think, one of those could be seen as an "attack" while the other 2 could be called quite innocent. Also the author doesn't go "capitalism bad socialism good" so that part is pretty mild.
Basically those three bad points of book are the reason why I give it 4.4 and not like 4.8 or 5. I hope you enjoy!
Good story I look forward to the continuation of the story Dear author
Good story I look forward to the continuation of the story Dear author
Good story I look forward to the continuation of the story Dear author
Amazing work and awesome writing!
I'm especially intrigued by the power system and can't wait to see more of it in the next chapters.
Added to my library and will be waiting for future chapters, good luck to the author!
I See One Second Into The Future: Loner In The Apocalypse is a story about about Kairos, someone who can see one second into the future. He uses this ability in order to survive a sudden apocalyptic event, where the sun is deadly, and monsters appear.
Novel had at interesting design, and the main character had a interesting ability, however there's too many things that cause you to go "that just doesn't make sense".
Writing quality is pretty good. It's readable, no obvious grammatical errors or mistakes. Nothing to write home about either. (4/5 stars)
Onto the story development. Like I said previously, this novel had a interesting premise, where the sun can kill you, while it creates various monsters. However, there is a downright ridiculous amount of plot holes. I'll just make a quick list.
- The words "loner in the apocalypse" are in the title. This is the opposite of what happens, the main character immediately makes a party with people who he doesn't trust. Later on, he accepted someone else into the party that he himself admitted that if the guy didn't have a certain weakness, he would try to kill them all.
- The main character doesn't trust his party, so he doesn't upgrade his stats to show of his strength. A few chapters after stating this, he immediately fights ten+ monsters all on his own. (They are more powerful than humans)
- Main character stocks up on stat points for no reason. You cannot add stat points while in combat as it would disrupt your attention. This happens over and over. He decided to attack a group of bandits with average-ish stats (2 - 4 points in each stat) while having 20+ points that aren't allocated.
- Main character fights some random chick with red hair that has a katana. After making her surrender, the main character asks for her katana. She gets a new weapon before giving it to them. Main character for some reason accepts this stupid arrangement. Then, the main character, despite literally being able to see the future, lets her take one of his companions hostage.
Theres more, but I can't be asked to write about this completely illogical story. (1/5 stars)
Character design. It's meh. Side characters are rather useless, not sure why the main character decided to take them in. After all, part of the title is "loner in the apocalypse". Aside from that, the main character is exceedingly stupid. Nothing he does makes sense. He accepts people he doesn't trust into his group, including people who have every reason to kill him. He decides to hide his strength, before choosing to randomly show it off a few chapters later, etc. (2/5 stars)
World background is a solid 3/5. I have only read eighteen chapters so I can't say a whole lot. There isn't a terrible amount of world-building, but the amount of content before the apocalypse was rather lackluster. Not much to say here. (3/5 stars)
Overall, I feel like the novel would've been much better if the author went through his novel for the ridiculous amount of plot holes. I feel like the author didn't really have a plan. I give this novel 3 out of 5 stars.
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