I love this story. There is only 1 thing I don't like about it but you did put a warning on every chpt and yet I still read it. I wish & hope that you will start this story back up and continue it. I would totally put 5 stars if it were not the fact that "stability of updating" was part of the ratings.
I'm a Sci-fi fan, this is a hidden gem, the only problem is the release schedule, hope the author can increase the chapters per week.
WE NEED MORE CHAPTERS
Really nice story but I think you should have an editor, not that the writing has any mistakes but some punctuation's can really help increase the reading experience. It's difficult reading without those.
I have to say that this world the author has created is really, really interesting. It's the type of story that makes me want to see it in the visual medium. Always while reading a chapter I am trying to visualize everything. And to be able to make the reader want to visualize is the proof of how invested they have become in your story.
Hera, in the first six chapters, has been very well written out and set up for further character development. Few people characterize their MCs in the first few chapters and many who try to do it are not able to very well. This is one of the rare examples of stories where it is done well and that just adds so much more to this story.
For a book that is more about world-building (at least that's what I understand from the description), you have created an excellent stage to further write.
A very solid read that I'd recommend people who like world-building to definitely try. Good work, Author!
Your story premise is fine, world building and character development are okay except the main character. For someone who is super smart and a doctor he acts like a f*cking moron. I get his desire to be doctor n such but he doesn't seem to be adapting or more like he is deluding himself and be willfully ignorant, it makes it hard to read the story. And what happened in the cube with the girl, the cube gave him info about what he could do to d girl n d potential negative effects 4 her and being a doctor he still couldn't get himself under control... I mean seriously?! With all d harping he's done about his dream of being a doctor n d reason he gave why, one would think he would have more self control...smh.Anyways good story but cos of d mc I doubt I'll be able to continue reading
This novel is basically what you would imagine the son of heaven to be.There's a lot of exaggeration you would maybe even think if it is a gimmick. This novel is very similar to History Number 1 Founder, Library Of Heaven's Path and to some extent History Strongest Senior Brother. So if you loved any of these novels mentioned you will be able to enjoy this novel.
Who made the cover?