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Well written. I was originally skeptical but the first 40 chapters turned out to be really engaging. I hope this gets picked, it has solid foundation and is entertaining. I really hope this book doesn't get dropped.
So, I really liked this novel. I thought it was an interesting use of the simulator, and kind of funny. I just want people to know that I read the RAWs and the story ends all of sudden. Like, literally everything is normal one chapter, and then the next it has a simulation that ends with a summary of the end of the series, and then at the end the author apologizes to all the readers @.@ Just giving people a warning before they use coins. Use free passes for this series! I still enjoyed it!
Camping for a change in translator!! Support my review if you agree, guys!! Let's help each other in this. I've waited for like 4 months and all I get is 6 chapters? Wth man.
Storyline was good. Got me hooked. There was no such errors. I liked the Mc development. It's not too slow and not too fast. Updating stability is also good.
Good job author!
i will not recommend i will not recommend
Interesting read, author. Very interesting read. The characters are nicely written and bring the book to life.
The plot is even written nicely so that you are waiting and wanting for another chapter.
Good job and keep up the good work.
Its a good book I like how the characters ability and the fact he doesn't hide his cultivation. But the fact that it took 4 chapter from 13 to 16 to just re describe everything that just happened all over again make me want to
its ok the cooking vibe and the other cooking if you know what i mean
The summary : Do not read thisMe : Understandable have a great day
Have any of you ever read a book that breathes? One that jus took seemed realistic enough to take a life on its own? Because this is one of them. I am not saying this as an exaggeration. I mean it as it stands, as I find this book incredible and much more deserving of views.
Let me preface this by saying, I did not play the original game it was ‘based’ on. I also use the word based loosely, just as this book takes a story on its own, and there was no need for any backgrounds info or experience from the original source, and I was immersed by the time I was at Ch 12-13.
Now, the grammar is great. Indisputably so. It is a sight for sore eyes on this side laden with bad syntax.
As for the characters, I do love a Main who is willing to be ruthless when it counts. We all know that’s a ***** hero isn’t interestingly anymore, but I have read many originals which try to skew as far away as possible, turning our Main into a hateful massmurderer, which in my opinion is worse. This book finds an acceptable (even interesting and innovative, I think) middle ground between altruistic superman and homicidal maniac.
For the world building, I quite honestly don’t know which is original and which has its origins in the game. So although lovely I will refrain from any comments. But what I can judge is the interactions between the characters in the world, there conversations, attitudes, relationships, and I can say that I feel submerged in a world that is not earth.
What I do struggle with, but that is really small, is the writing style as sometimes I find the same words repeated over in a narrative passage (a personal ire taught to me since elementary school). But let us be real, it would not be a problem in the myriad of different, much worse, originals, so it won’t be one for me here either. You know what the say, when everything’s perfect, the mistakes just turn more glaring, and what would never ge an issue in mediocrity can be in great works. So I will leave my review at 5 stars. No less, no more.
I think this may have gotten me into si-fi ^^’
interesting and mysterious. I would love to read more and see what happens next. I might not be a good reviewer but at least this is what I personaly think. Cheers! lets help this novel everone!