TheUrbanimmortal
A good storyline, the characters are fascinating to an extent that grabs the readers attention. A beautiful picture is created through these words. Overall a nice novel.
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i don't whether these are fake reviews or not but No.
this is definitely not a 5 star book.
there are alot of mistakes in grammar.
the first few chapters made me not want to read it anymore;
spoiler alert
I mean seriously?!
the MC gets kidnapped by a mafia leader then adopts him as his father?
Goes on ONE date then tells the girl I love you?
shows off like a noob to her father that he is a mage alchemist etc.. i mean why? you could hid some, just being a mge is enough why show off lol
this is clearly a bad novel.
Really high quality novel. Good writing and grammar and I really like the premise of the novel. I really hope to see more chapters released by the author. Peace and love.
well, story development is a bit rushed like he just completes one event disaster and new disasters are in line for him to solve. well, atleast like some other novels, mc doesn't behaves naive and doesn't bring trouble to himself that's a good thing. world background is good but it seems like everybody is only focusing on him too much. well enjoyed it. keep up.
The plot seems interesting, picking up treasures along the way. Sadly the story starts midway and has a lot of loopholes. The MC doesn't have much brain and follows the usual face slapping routine. On top of that the translation isn't very good. It's a no for me.
This is a good novel, the plot is solid and characters are likeable, the writing quality is good and it's easy to read, I def recommend it, good luck and well done author!
Amazing cute romance novel that I finished in 3~h at midnight. I was definitely hooked by this haha, pity that they stopped translating it for what I can see, however I will definitely continue reading this amazing gem if it finally updates
Hi,Thank you all for reading, I promise it'll be worth your time
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WN why bring something that was already done long ago like really now. There's some good reads yall can translate but don't instead bringing old things which won't see past chapter 40
Cringe 0%
Generic 0%
Wholesome 99.99%
LOL 99.99%
Potential to be a good story: 99.99%
(This should be the new review system)
I definitely liked the story very much. I liked the MC, his optimistic personality and his way of life.
Luck, the main theme, seems to be working in mysterious ways.
