I thought the author is making the MC in to a cold blooded, level minded guy who does what ever is necessary to become strong like in the "warlock of the magus world" novel. but now i realize that the author is making the MC into a sick psychotic brainless cannibal. By chapter 70 the only thing i can say about this MC is that he is a disgusting trash. So disappointing.
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Since this is new and i kinda like the synopsis, i'll rate it as 3 stars ( neutral ). I'm expecting a good novel. Hope i won't be disappointed.
High quality writer very few mistakes for a story. Good plot wit many twists and turns although kind of bumpy when it should have a more float kind of way. Can’t wait for next chapter and stories too short
How dark is this story?
This first couple arcs are a fantastic tale of industry intrigue and competition. There are awesome set pieces, mystery, exciting battles, all of which contribute to the overall plot.
The second half is just a Star Trek rip off that even the protagonist can wait to end. Its boring, and has no clear weight on the main plot. There no stakes, no mech designs, no other fun characters (except Ketis way later)
This isn’t the first time I’ve seen an author shoot there story in the foot by introducing a long and, at the end of the day, waste of time arc. Maybe theres a huge pay off at the end, but several hundred chapters to get there means you’re milking the story for your readers money more than advancing the plot.
The grammar and conversations are unreadable
One of the best novels with Op mc and background just to my liking. Just hope the story won’t develop like those cliche novels. MC right now is not bad, I mean he ain’t like those arrogant fools who go around offending everyone though this mc’s background is op tis not invicible after all and his backing can’t fight against the world alone, he is rational not like those trash who lose themselves out of a little provacation, not like those prideful or face valued fools that don’t know how to take a step back leading to a disaster, at least now he ain’t like those pathectic and rightheous or evil mcs who would go around causing unecessary troubles and being chased like someone who deflowered the heavenly emperor’s favorite daughter which shoulda never happened b/c things aint got nothing to do with them , not lustful like those harem seeking idiots etc. Hey, i just hope that after The Dao heart trails he get sublimated in hist mental state and mood, become calm like ancient well and restrained. In the cultivation world benefit is paramount, i don’t even know why 99.9% of transmigrators always neglect this fact. It is not like they don’t know, they read countless novels and knows almost everything they should be the calmest and low key people out of all in the cultivation world. Although sometimes things are not controllable, many troubles can still be avoided, most of them be face slapping, short tempered, proud, domineering to the point of stupidity, after money, woman and immediate power saying “ I wanna pretend like my fellow transmigrators” This is absurd, why should you be like them just because you have the same origins and do brainless things without getting any benefits, later they get angered full of resentment by being betrayed by their so called woman or the one they trusted the most at critical moments when they already know ‘trust’ don’t exist in cultivation world ofc their good parents is an exception but cannot even be absolute trust in them; the human heart is unpredictable as long the benefit is worth the loss even the so called bottom line can be broken, the holy saint can become the devil. Only few of the MCs put their knowledge from earth to use and Use the heaven and earth as the chess board, sentients beings as chess pieces and making use of those fools who can’t control the greed in their hearts, calculating the heavens and playing a game of chess with heavenly dao and the opponents. In short MC can’t get too emotional and let emotions affect his mood and decions otherwise he should go be a mortal and live some life under the threat of death at anytime since mortals are ants.Anyways, this novel starting is good, just hope that it won’t develop in a disappointIng direction. More chapters need.
Solid three this a great read for noobs, but only newbies. Need more work too much description dialogue that is easily forgettable........................
IDK..
Seems like a ripoff to me (Im really a superstar). The world building makes no sense at all to me and the story is meh.
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How do you happen to spend the last 5 years of your life as a crime boss? Like mehn.. not only that, you are a legendary boss who deals with the pizza theif. Ahaha. This is mystery and comedy and everything all together. I'm impressed
At the start, I felt like there is a mentor kind of relationship with Hades and la puppeteer! If you could pull it off, this would be epic! Although there are few grammatical writings from here and there, one sweep of editting will make the entire novel at its finest!
Kudos for the author!