great story line looking forward for the update .........................................................................................??
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while there's the occasional wring word used in places, I assume that is due to translation .
I LOVED this story. I adored little Zaos and his never yield attitude. it was great. Some Character's story can be heartbreaking, others are amazing in their depth and uniqueness. check out the story. I'm sure others will enjoy it as much as I am.
if you like author last novel and system typa story, then this might be your cup of tea !
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do you guys have the goods?
I know you know what I mean...
the most addictive drug for readers
the raws, it makes you addicted for the pleasure of reading a whole book
I know I used it before hehe
I'm waiting for the news boys
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Serously a brainless story. The author doesn't know anything they're writing about.
Main character is apparently from the "slums" when he lives on an island city in the United States. Really? Literally the most expensive places to live around the world are on coasts and islands.
The author also constantly pushes elitist ideals when describing the entire human race. They're constantly saying things like, "Someone from the slums has no intelligence" and treat him like an animal because of his social status when that literally makes no sense.
A story is bound to fail when literally every chapter is an insult to the reader, their culture, their country, or their way of life.
for some reason, I can't remove this from my library... I tried to remove this novel, with one other, the other novel was deleted, but this one didn't get removed...
as at chapter 65 I'm really struggling here I can see great potential in this novel but this isn't making any sense. The mc is a coward like severe coward and everyone his age is basically a drama queen everyone throwing temper tantrums out of the blue for little to ko reason. the people that bully him he doesn't even take revenge despite now having power. this novel just feels like I'm walking in a quagmire question after question and nothing ever gets explained literally nothing
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nice.................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................thx for good book
Excellent novel in comparison to many qidians. A new flavor but we all know this wont be picked so ill just Finish Up my word count and go lol.
Wow, this book make me enjoy my spend time. Love it that words so big good, love it because i like to read it more and always be joy.
I will wit you at the next chapters Thor!