This book is very much what it says on the synopsis, its a book where he only has a proficency panel to see his progress/complete incomplete skills, very very basic system in essense, its a good story but the MC is very much both naive and a coward early on and while the world is dangerous we have yet to see if its just paranoia or if theybreally are out to get him. Overall well worth the read if you like alchemy/money hungry/cautious protagonists.
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it's really good. I.do recommended.
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Well that's quite good, but i believe author need to be carefull not to make the MC a cringe dark teenager. I don't mind a psycho but not an emo.
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nice story and good story line and love to read ahead of chapters..nice story and good story line and love to read ahead of chapters..nice story and good story line and love to read ahead of chapters..nice story and good story line and love to read ahead of chapters..
tried really hard to make it past the first chapter. really, I did. the grammar made my eyes bleed and bled, due to inability to stick to present or past tense, and the blonde man with the katana and many wives made me cringe so hard that my father felt it.
along with mc's inability to draw even the simplest only conclusions and the never ending train if tropes running their own train on my eyes, I couldn't make it.
OP, please download grammar.ly or MS word with spell check, please. your product would be infinitely better even without proof reading.
quite a good story. it is not easy when you pitch the ordinary with the exceptional. that sounds like a boring one sided match but it actually is not. i was reminded of the movie small soldiers where the gorgons who have been programmed to hide finally decide to fight. maybe i will see that in this story.
good job by the author.
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This novel was amazing. I love ecah of the cuaracters. My favourite was Cana. I also loved the development of Yamato's character from being a weak and unreliable guy to the strong man that he is now. 10/10. It's a must read.