Honestly, this is not the type of book I would generally be reading (I usually read fantasy plus romance that easy to read). Nonetheless, this book started out really well and has a great description. I can't really say anything about grammar, spelling, typos, and anything related as it was also my great issue. But I think this book is really great for those who liked the genre. Keep writing, author. Good luck ;)
Is Author even alive cuz this story is very interesting and hope it continues i come back to this story every week to see if he posted any updates
This is a book that has words and a plot and characters. It could be considered a novel, but it's concept isn't very novel. I would rate it a solid three out of five stars, as that's the median score available. Please read for yourself if you like to read books.
There are probably about 3 or 4 novels I'm reading or have read with this kind of premise and are way better than this one. [Whenever I see novels with exact/same premise/themes I often wonder if it's like this kind of premise was made as a theme for a writing contest and the best ones would be the winner. Clearly this one was one of those that DID NOT make it to top 10. :lol: ]
Omg, would you guys fucking stop already. You people, didn't even read the novel. The review section doesn't talk about the fact if the novel is good or not. No simply ****ting B.S. everywhere. Atleast, give this one a goddamn try. Fuck this B.S.
Very similar to The Legendary Mechanic. Same Virtual Reality concept with more or less similar protagonists. More Chinese humor that doesn't make sense. Pretty solid character development. Story has hinted towards progressing towards space.
Let us put aside Mad Snail variable from this review. From early chaps I see major drawback from early chapters. In this genre Author need to plant the seed of curiousity a.k.a potential plot development in early chapters because avid reader already read many kind of this novel. But except grinding we don't see much in 40 chaps. I think author just going slow and steady for development.Other than that, we already got some potential major conflicts, Iron willed MC that have grip on his temper, and our favorite and probably one of most produced genre. Wdyt fellow daoist?
this is amazing i enjoyed it so much and big thanks for the author for making this you are amazing so keep going on and hoping for more ccccccooooooooooooooooooollllllllllllllllllllllll