Fun.
Very good novel, I personally havent noticed any writing mistakes, the story is developing very well, the chracters are all interesting(imo), and the world background is good.
Daniel Bryan style: YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YEEEEEEESSSS!!!!
Every [Man of Culture] will find this quite satisfying. Thanks for the hard work!
This is a good novel
I would recommend reading it(If its to your taste)
The writing is of good quality there is few grammar errors here and there but it isn't anything major(Thank you author)
Character development and world building was slow but it was at a comfortable pace(You know some novels go for 100-150 chapters to have a year pass with supreme pace(which i don't like)Thank you author for that)
Updating is hectic but hopefully it improves from now on
So all in all it's a good read I like hope it continues like this and it improves with time
PS:This review is after reading all 50 chapters
It’s not worth it. There is no plot. 40 chapters, and there is not a lot of story progression.
The author focuses too much on trying to world build by telling (not showing) us the history of things that have happened.
They do not focus on the characers.
Speaking on the characters, the real main character appears to be Anna as the author spends most of their time with her and her perspective. Which would be fine if the synopsis or initial part of the story sold it as such. No, it feels like it was switched on you halfway through.
I read despite the terrible writing quality that only gets slightly better after chapter 11.
Even though the story has great promise, I realized its not worth my time. And I am reading the free chapters. If I had to unlock chapters to read more world building with no story progression or about their tribe hunting… would not happen.
There is no kingdom building when I stopped reading.
I don't know why the translator is even bothering working on this book
Worst book I have ever read
The story development and the character design sucks
grammar is so bad that its hard to follow what's happening at times which makes it hard to enjoy
Music is love. Music is life. I mostly read mangas about music and haven't read about Music in novels. Well, there are some instances in some novels but they were mostly zither or qin. Will this have a Guitar? Drums? Flutes or other modern instruments? If yes, then I'm definitely following it.
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The writing style is highly polished, and I can infer that the author based it off of more traditional novel styles. The method applied by the author in which they developed the world, plot, and character archetypes alludes to styles utilized by Tolkein, Faulkner, Austen, etc.
Easy to comprehend, and there isn't a stress of dialogue. The presence of multiple main characters is interesting, and they're represented well. From what I'm reading, the characters are mostly reticent and not very outspoken, which is well complemented by the lack of direct statements of speech and thoughts, rather revealing their actions to implicitly display them instead. However, dialogue is indeed present in the latter portions of the novel. That it isn't abused or placed as the central component of the novel, is a refreshing find.
The emphasis on worldbuilding in the prologue could be stretched over the first few chapters. However, it's still a good read nonetheless. Compared to the other novels in this database with their overemphasized, dramatic explosion of a beginning, this novel with a slow, more relaxed and indirect development of the plot is truly an interesting and refreshing find.
Let's start with the synopsis.... Just like Author described in the synopsis- It's a story were mc is the villain and he will destroy all haven-child, I mean protagonists. Well at lest that's what I think...
I am currently at chapter 52. In those 52 chapters only 10 days has passed... yup only 10 days has passed since mc came to know that he is a villain, which was in first chapter. So, I would say that the pace in which the story is progressing is very slow, very very slow.
Another depressing thing is that Mc is not a villain but more like Protagonists. Why you ask?
Well, you see.... for the past 52 chapters all mc did was run after girl and adding girl too his harem, while giving excuses like saying that it was to increase his strength, or to control the big families, or saying that he would steal all the heroines of the protagonists... So, all in all, what I'm trying to say is that, for the first 52 chapters all Mc did was run behind girls and adding them in his harem. He already added 4 members, while 2 more are in the process to be added... Oh and he is also thinking about how add more girls.
And another depressing thing is that, no protagonists has appeared up until now. And I don't think any will appear anytime soon... maybe after another 100 chapter. Well.
And I don't think mc will stop collecting women anytime soon. Pretty disappointing.
Sorry author don't mind my review. I am just frustrated to see that all mc doing collecting women. All in all, not my cup of tea.
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