Great story i like it
Was waiting for another novel about blacksmithin called “Blacksmithin the tempering begins with ones flesh” It has an original idea of forging oneself into a weapon
great character developmentcharacters feel alive descriptions are great writing quality is beyond good updates regularkeeps you on the edgelove it keep it up
heyo crazy cronie here,review on 02/04/2021 @chap28 (released chap till date: 39)review divided in: Short reviewLong review IMORatingsConclusionWarning (includes spoilers) short review: A good SOL novel. Maybe Dark SOL? Mc ain't dense and pussy unlike most SOL novels. Badass mc with likeable daughter.long review: pros: 1) A good SOL novel. Basic concept similar to most novels though the execution of the plot is entertaining2) This is a little dark novel. But also has fluffy side. Contradictory huh? Read it and you might understand. 3) A badass, savvy & OP mc. 4) The writing is simple and easy to understand. TL is doing a good job for now with the translation.5) Characters even though not properly fleshed out, it isn't bad to the point it's unreadable.6) the interactions between the characters are better than most novels out there. Though it exactly doesn't feel real, the interactions between the mc and his daughter never fails to put a smile on my face at the end of the chapter7) No probs with pacing. Nothing seems out of place.cons:1) [NOT REALLY A CONS] As mentioned above this novel has a dark side despite the fluffy romance moments. (This depends person to person, for me a pro.)2) [NOT REALLY A CONS] Inconsistent update! Really hate it!!! (7ch/d for og) & (14ch/d for tl). But this is my personal scale so you might as well ignore it.3) There are few typo errors, though it's not to the point that it's unreadable. No prob with grammar.. 4) Greedy WN & TLs locked this novel only after 4 chaps!! This sucks. That's why deducted points from updates.5) Even though the interactions are awesome, we many times fail to grasp the emotions and facial expressions of the characters, since it's never mentioned what expressions the characters really have on their face. 6) No world build up and no plotline as of now. One can guess some plotlines tho but we know nothing of this world!IMO:- We need consistent updates!!!!RATINGS: writing: 8/10 (pro-4 & con-3)update: 4/10 (con-2)plot: 8.5/10 (pro-1&2, con-1&6) characters: 9/10 (pro-3&5)pacing: 8/10 (pro-7)dialogues: 8.5/10 (pro-6 con-5)entertainment: 9.5/10OVERALL: 4/5 Conclusion:An amazing SOL novel with excellent potential; the only prob being updates! Hope to see regular updates in this one... Chapter 1 will be enough to hook most of you to this novel.WARNING: *SPOILER (not exactly)*- MC is SUPER OP! But also kinda submissive to his daughter... Can be seen as his love for his daughter (fatherly love no Incest!!!)
Another cultivation novel with generic one-dimensional characters and plot armor.I don't really mind the other characters but the fucking MC. HE has gained a few memories from the original but only remembered the more convenient ones as for the rest, they were sealed for some reason by the original.The mc is so bland that even the premise feels fucking stupid.there was this chapter when he went to an old acquaintance who asked to play some type of chess yet he didn't know how to play and just started putting pieces outside or something, when the other guy saw it, he was like" Wow amazing, you're so smart."It happens almost every time he goes out, someone tooting his horn about how great the mc is.
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I was drawn to the story by the cover. glad I did decided to read it. ????????????????????????????????????
Indeed, this novel will bring you the science and fantasy, always able to bring you into an unlimited imagination. I like this novel.recommended for you
King threw him out for being uselsss and he suddenly want to him back and apologize when he knew he had gotten power and he doesn't feel guilty and he wants NAOKA to fight for his continent i mean where is common sense well MC is useless without system so if he didn't have system so far it's good mc doesn't spare anyone he just kill them cant wait whare mc kills his way continent and destroy the continent and kill his mom dad and his freinds
Started as a sort of nice twist to the usual dungeon stories but the mediocre grammar, zero character development, one dimensional lame mediocre side character and cartoon villains make this a forgettable novel.Suffers the usual mediocre lame grammar pretty much every single story in this website has.Would not recommend.