Its better than most novels on here but I would not call it a masterpiece. The writing is ok but nothing where I just want to keep reading. Its not immersive at all. I had to drop the novel at around Chapter 20 because reading the novel is just not engaging in my opinion.Kind of feeling bad to give this a negative review because you can see that the author put a lot of effort into his creation. But I just got bored. Its just not mine sorry.
I didn't expect this to be decent. I halfheartedly read this but find that this novel is quite good. Even though the translation deteriorated as chapters released like a second hand faulty phone. Well we can't forget the greedy translators chopping chapter up to 4 or 5 chapters even though in the original it's only one chapter. Overall there's no problem with the novel but the webnovel itself.?
It is a good representation of what could happen in the event of such a catastrophe.The interactions between characters appear accurate from a psychological standpoint.The world background is detailed without being overly verbose about it.It makes for a good read.
Bruhhhhhhh really?This is just getting overboard at this point.Makes me wonder if webnovel has been abandoned. Sheesh, is you are just gonna copy a finished novel and pass it off as a new one than what's the point.And here I was thinking webnovel actually got something readable for once.
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It's an interesting story. I hope to see it continue as I ran out of chapters to read just as it began to pick up. I rated it the way I did because I need more content to go on.
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These 5 star ratings are lies! Do not believe it. It is the worst novel on the voting pool in my opinion. You will understand what I mean when you read it. It is just so disappointing. The premise was very interesting, it is similar to Shadow Hack with two worlds and you would think it would be the advanced version of it. It is not. It is even worse in my opinion. The author added comedy to it and it just didnt work. It left bad impression.
Also the body he occupied family relations was just too much. It was so awkward to read, he gave in too much for a family who think lowly of him and the MCs character is very naive and easy to sway type. Not a consistent character development. Also mentions of potential match with the sister who (spoiler alert) is not his real sister was just nasty. Do not reccomend it.
The world and the arcs as of ch83 are descriptive and well built. The story pacing is okay. But my main problem is that the Mc for a genius has a brain that isn't functioning most of the time. This is mostly done to hinder the Mc development and standing and getting some suspense into the story. I have no problem with dumb Mc's, I am quite fond of Luffy(One Piece) after all, but I hate it when an author tries to sell me an idiot as a Genius. And he is seemingly only made an idiot to limit his op ability.
Your story Backgound is interesting but it was not really writen much after the intro and i fand this the best part of your story.
Writing quality is bad, you can read the story but to many gramar fault but the greteatst BS is your characters in the story. To many bad cliches. lack of consistency and logic, when i have read the story i was thinking are all persons in the game idiots or 5 year old children?
Well, the novel still don't have a review so I put one.
The story is great but i'm confuse of what is the realm of the cultivation and how carefree the mc is when someone threaten him taking his woman. But everything is good, keep up the good work bruh.