LaloVazquez
This is incredible and mind-blowing. I am in awe in front of your writing skills. Like, seriously.
I have only read the first chapter so far and the feeling of betrayal in the very first part... god, you know how to play your audiences.
I can’t promise to read this book to the end - or at least not in the time being - since the chapters are a bit long and I already have many books to read. However, for people who are interested in reading a long and well-written book, I definitely recommend this book.
WOW. just Wow. This is very well written. The descriptions are vivid and the emotions were well shown. The story itself were very interesting and the plot. The character's development was smooth. I'm gonna be following this story.
Great job author. This is really wonderful.
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This isnt a villain novel dont get baited, mc is just ruthless but even that its only to ppl who provoke him. Hes a system slave, completely dependant on it and its powers. The 'protags' are more evil than the mc himself. In recent chapters its gone with the cliche 'I will make you my woman' route zzzzzzzz. The mc is just a young master, slapping faces and dispensing righteousness. Author seems to think that just because someone goes against an individual labelled the 'protag' it means they are a villain, dissapointing.
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good novel...best novel in this traile read...,,,must try..,................................,.....,....,.............,.,.................,..
The premise from the sinopse and early chapters is arrogant overpower no guild, in the chapter 10 he is dumb, useless, weak and naive, I can't understand how a Mc that left the a job to try to get a live in games, will be this clueless about the game, you left your income, the first thing is have a deep knowledge about the game, I was not expecting that.Is a good novel if you want to read a slow story with a naive mc, I don't want thought.
Alright so I made a review earlier and I went way too easy, this has to be a horrible novel, I gave it 3.6 but it's not worth that, the author is dumb, added a whole new thing to the world background, Mc has op plot armor, does no work and gets legendary shield class and op abilities in only the 8th chapter. I feel really bad for the people that read this. Trust me, it's not worth it and even the author dropped it. Don't read this go find something actually good
Love the writing skill behind this book. Fantastic world building and description of events! Not something I met everyday. Job well done, fellow author! I had a great time reading this. If you're thinking of reading it, go ahead. You will not regret it at all.
You have strong and great concept to work with, it felt pretty original, but the grammar makes me lose some of the immersion sometimes, but looking past that, I was able to enjoy the mechanics of the world you have built, keep it up!
Been reading supreme magus since the beginning. It’s beautiful and well thought out. The author has a great grasp on English. The character progresses through a type of cultivation. But most of his progress is through hard work and learning from his mistakes!
