LaloVazquez
What a shame...... clearly it's a sketch of the novel profane prince of domination, however it's a little worse, mc poorly done, and the way you try to fragment the scenes is bad, after all it's not an anime, it doesn't flow .
Seems interesting for now. Reminds of that other novel in a more modern setting where the system would take over the MC to do some kind of heroic acts.
One of the best novels, if you like the nordic culture you will love this novel :)
The world building and the game element is awelsome, the background of Colt is great to. But the best is the vikings elements, i love this.
-sorry for my english, this is not my native lenguage-
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The story paints a vivid picture of the world where the action takes place. Through the usage of the tiny elements of the world, the author instantly immerses the reader into the rich in flavour world of his creation.
I really hate speaking about the plot as I believe everyone should try it themselves. Despite that, solidly written cliches and relatively standard openings allows me to peer into what possibly this novel have in store.
Execution of the further plot is what I'm actually curious about, as I have a feeling that it will exceed my expectations on this one.
In the end, I cannot really say much about the story. It's a solid piece of the literature that promises a tasty piece of webnovel down the line.
Now it's up to author to live up to the promises his chapters give.
I have yet to catch up on the novel, besides the grammar errors, this has been quite a decent novel so far. Keep it up author, thanks for the uploads.
Hey author, good day for writing! We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email amanda_nl21@*outlook.com (delete *) for details.
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i have been reading it's MTL version it is good one .........can be given a chance to go further [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This translation is simply trash of the lowest tier.
The gender of certain characters changes constantly and the grammar is awful while staying on a level below grade school.
If this was a fan translation I would still recommend a few more years of learning English.
BUT this is supposed to be professional and more importantly paid work. This is insulting and deplorable.
The story hasn't taken off. So far its all preparatory story of what could happen. By thinking about the initial chapters, I still have a vague idea of what could possibly happen.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
