Despite having some words mistake and the background of the world isn't as logical as it could be, the story is understandable and entertaining. I always wanted a more mafia focused story that wasn't atrocious to read. The story flows well but I'd like a bit more development to the character of the protagonist. Overall a great find and a gem in rough. I'm rooting for the author.
Please let me know if anyone is reading this book by ur reviews so that I know if to continue or delete it completely..... tell me what you think
after reading this , I just can't wait to read the next chapter . to much excited to read next chapter.
story seems to be interesting and awesome
I am up to date on the story. I can say that it is a good story. A good job has been done. The characters, the development, the world are all good enough. I can't say that I experienced any boredom while reading it. You certainly did a good job. As for the suggestion part, I think it is not right to constantly assign an adjective to predicates. For example, "I'm leaving." his voice was harsh. It is normal to use this at the beginning, but as the story progresses and we get to know the character, the reader should be able to understand such things. Of course, you are the author, the decision is yours. Finally, I wonder how long the story will be, it seems like there are strange events that can be told.
seriously getting sick of these novels that get to chapter 41 and immediately change the translation to mtl. This is why I'll never pay to read on this again.
Tbh, Its alright. My only issue is with the MC, not that he is bad his personality is to my liking, however, he does not really make much sense. His profession in his past life does not match up with all the "inventions" that he knows. Its unrealistic to the point its kind of annoying. How does a civil engineer know how to make paper? the same can be said for war weapons. We all know what a gun is, but 99 percent of us would not be able to make a gun in a medieval world. In addition, the Mc's personality shift after reincarnating is not talked about enough. Your telling me if randomly your dearest loved one had a personality shift your not even going to acknowledge it? The story is kinda entertaining because I love superior MC's, revenge, and face slapping. But the points I mentioned before unfortunately turn this into an average novel. Theres nothing wrong with average, it is not good nor is it bad. I personally recommend reading it to see if the whole irritate you or not. I wish the characters were explored a bit more so we can see why they do what they do. Its entertaining only for a little bit when only the MC and the people he cares about is smart. Overall Ill give this a solid 3, im not mad at it, but unfortunately its not for me, ill read on until chapter 100 to give an updated review, currently on chapter 35.
Very good book. It has a good story and i would really recommend to read it
I love this book. It's my no. 1 book in my library. I rereading a few of its chapters more than 3 times. Highly recommended
The story is very interesting and the dialogues exchange is also very good. I will definitely follow this book till it's end
The plot was unique and immediately piqued my
Interest. The story development was also well in pace. Not too fast nor not too slow. I could feel the author's unique writing style and I liked it.Author did a great job in describing scenarios.All in all author did a great job and looking forward to read more.
I will definitely give 5/5 to encourage author and for his/her hardwork.
Usual apocalyptic stories are really hard to explain, but you explain it very well
One of the best books, I have ever read.
Please don't drop this like The Path of Medicine with a System.
I want to finish this crazy good story.
Too much nationalism after 100 chapters and becoming trashy with as you keep reading. By the chapter 160-170 I had to drop it..................................