The plot is very intriguing. I like how it started. It shows the author's writing style and imagination. I highly recommend this to anyone who are into this genre :D Great job author-nim :D
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I've read the first three chapters in a hurry, and they basically shove a good amount of info straight up that I just skipped them. There was no emotional investment on my part either as the MC was abruptly introduced out of nowhere. There was no life whatsoever, everything is technical as though the one narrating was an AI.
I love that de fei is a reformed player killer that show a greater thought about the character. He seem a more well rounded character in some interestingly tough situations.
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Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email [email protected] We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). A brief introduction along with a few samples or links will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!
Hey there!
Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact [email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Hey Webnovelist!
Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email [email protected] We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). A brief introduction along with a few samples or links will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!
Truly a remarkable story. The synopsis was so captivating that it made me read all the chapters at once. The emotions were well depicted and honestly writer I envy how you portrayed them so well. Me added it to my library. Good luck author!!
F to the people who thought this was a novel but got a troll novel.
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So far, I think your world-building is pretty cool. I like the RPG system you've picked up and the whole character customisation thing in the second chapter is also interesting to read as it gives the audience an insight on what the character's thought process and interests are like. I appreciate the element of comedy as well, the part about GOD and the abbreviation. I feel like you could add more description on your world building as well and tweak your grammar a bit in some parts. Otherwise, thank you for writing this. All the best, author :D
It was neat
What an amazing story!!?
The plot is maintained so well?
i am looking forward to your next chapters and the twist and turns?
Best of luck author??