avoid describing the main characters features or looks too often. its too redundant..maybe just how their facial expression and how they dress up will do.
I absolutely love this story the characters the storyline everything is just awesome and I can't stop reading it thankyou
oh love this kind of story about family love. can't get this over. Love Love Love.........
The plot is intriguing enough to keep the reader entertained. But the author’s command of the English language is sadly lacking. Author needs to immerse themselves in a culture surrounded by English speakers. Very awkward in many places. Very off-putting and disruptive to the narrative.
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Awesome novel
A bit complicated with despotic father... But really good novel.
Loved it hope there is more to it later
Interesting beginning and quite good..
It’s getting more interesting. It’s like eating chocolates , wanting more bites.
Can we get at least 2 chapters a day and also update on when the chapters are going to be released. I'm enjoying the story too much so far that I can't wait for the next chapter, the suspense is killing me...
what a great book, where can get the book for purchase