Just the title alone is hilarious and I'm expecting lots of funny moments in this one. The book may lack chaps as of the moment, making the world background and story progression somewhat unclear, but I'm confident enough to say that this book will end up great, considering the author's skill with his craft. I'll leave this here to tell the future readers not to miss this one.
this novel should be called: "I am ****ty copy/paste urban fiction system". i really tried to give this novel a fair chance, but after x novel on the same theme this is absolute trash. it copy/pastes almost every situation that other novels have, does it with totally unrealistic 2d characters in totally unrealistic situations. dont even bother with it
It seems like a good story but the writing is absolutely horrendous in my opinion. Its worse than even MTL in my opinion. I had to reread sentences 5 times because I couldn’t understand what it was supposed to say. It could’ve been a very good story, but the writing made me lose 2 brain cells.
This book has some of the best world design I've ever read. The characters are extremely well written and have their own opinions thoughts and little qwerks that make them unique. You can clearly see the Author's care for this novel, and I look forward to reading more of the story!
some clarification regarding Mc of this novel. if you're looking for smart or cunning, or jack all of trade MC, then this novel may not be for you. you can proceed with your search and leave this section.that's the warning now it's for the clarification.I have been reading a lot of complaints saying the mc is dumb or idiot. stop with your twisted logic guys, if someone is not smart it does not mean he's an idiot or dumb. I never created the MC to be smart, he just, a dude who never finished his middle-school and has been fighting on the street for almost half of his life. that's basically the mc's background, a street thug who talks by his fist. Drop your high expectation for him to be cunning or something else.does the mc will change in the future? yes, of course, there will be character development for him. He will change as the story goes on.My idea of the Main Character is not someone perfect in everything, but someone who is good at one thing and uses that thing to the top. I have even an idea to use a disabled as the Main Character. anyway, In this case, the Main Character is good at fighting and he will fight all the way to the top. that's it.if one day, I make a smart main character, he would never be strong, but he just uses his smart brain to solve everything which is extremely hard to create (at least for me, it's hard).That's it, while I am here, the chapter's length is around 1200-2000 words, so sometimes you will feel the chapter is long and sometimes short.