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Very good novel so far. .. .. .. .. .. ..
Here we go. I’m at around chapter 85. Loved how it started, author covered the basics, why the MC knows this and that,etc. I love the gaming elements novels, and the mystery with the character that dies with a couple of great items but not breaking balance completely is done well.Now unfortunately it gets worse. The MC is introduced as a veteran gamer of various VR games, with at least some training in martial arts. Then as the game keeps goings he forgets more and more of this gaming knowledge (note, im ok with him not being an expert or godly reflexes,etc, but not evolving as fast as you can inspect, making noob mistakes and forgetting basic gaming elements… I hate when you dumb an MC). We add to that a helper, a guide in the form of a fairy. I like that, even when she does not tell you everything, but only if the reason is because she can’t (rules). Defenetly not because of her ego, snappy remarks, rudeness, sense of superiority, etc. And the MC reactions being to act timidly and senseless. I also did not like him keeping a guy who gets into trouble to hide under you after throwing the rock. Really? That’s the companion he wants to stick with?Finally, I am going after starting a quest where he knows he is being manipulated, knows a solution (kill him or blackmail him back, or at least tell the truth about the quest) and still does nothing. Once this issues are solved the novel can be quite good. Good idea, good background, good writing and stable updates. But the before mentioned just makes it more unbereable the more you read. Keep it up author, it’s good work, but try to improve on the mentioned.
Really don’t understand how this could have become 3rd on weekly ranking - really poorly written, some of the most gaping plot holes I have witnessed not to mention the thick layers of plot armour. Many of the situations seem to have been made up on a whim of the author and going from 0 to 100 as he seems to get bored of sticking to one subject.They do say copying is the best form of flattery but some of this is just down right plagiarism from various stories - he randomly started throwing in hunter x hunter terms etc. for a couple of chapters then seems to totally forget about it. Overall, largely disappointing.
this novel is truly a gem its plot is so unpredictable and new things keep getting added in the plot by the author plus its world building is fantastic and there are so many plotlines for every known cliche of webnovels that this novel might have something for every kind of reader from fantasy to revenge plot to silly but funny harem drama truly a jack of all trades
You have an extremely amazing book here. I would love to see more!
This book is so amazing and suspenseful, please updateeeeeee!!!!!
joyyyyyyyyyyy
I recommend this book to anyone looking to read action, intrigue and romance. I love this story, the character, and the author really deserves the readers support.
Great story!!!! Couldn’t stop reading
waiting for the next chapter
This book is really starting to bother me and it had great potential to be great. The truth is right under their noses but they’re choosing to ignore it or tiptoe around it and then you have these kids always plotting and scheming, can they act their ages please ... can Nolan just find out the truth