The first part had alot of descriptions, but aside from that its all good,
The world is varied
The characters are good
And the mc is, not sure at the moment, but ill add when i do.
If you are looking for something fun and a lot of kickarse action this one is def where you need to go to looking cause seriously one of the best villain stories period! I would look no further because you ain't gonna find anything this good elsewhere! ;3
Great evil mc novel. I'd say one of-if not the best on the platform right now.
Updates are consistent and grammar has a few negligible mistakes.
The author has crafted a plot that still challenges the mc despite him being stronger than those of his age. There is a good balance between action and scheming with there being actual tension and consequences following the mcs actions.
The mc is someone that can be called a true neutral evil character who doesnt fall into those edgy self delusional monologues about power, killing etc. He wants to grow in power and will do anything to get it. Nice and clean.
Side characters have brains and their own goals that may or may not align with the mc making the world more realistic instead of those carboard cutouts we see everywhere now.
World and power system are familiar but its done in a way thats not boring or predictable.
The story is very very good but there are too many characters. Can't remember their names. Plot is amazing and even mysterious. Can't even wait to know what happens ahead. This story is so interest grabbing that one can't leave it..
Thank you.
Spectacular novel... the plot twist is mind juggling. The set up is unique as well.. it’s a fascinating novel. Will urge all to have a peek after the first chapter you would get hooked.
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Moreeeee pls im hooked by just reading 3 chapterd more power and more chapters.
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Great plot, great characters and settings, overall an awesome book.
Thanks Author
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only problem is that this shun long is too prideful for no reason at all, I somewhat accept he wants to become strong so he doesn't die again even though the motivation was crap and forcefull but where the **** does he get his stupid ass pride from?
Seemed interesting. I thought, Hey a story about a sytem that slowly turns tbe mc into a fill blown vampire, neat right? While the idea is certainly cool, and the world backgrojnd at least plausible in the sense that its slightly different from the usual people from regular earth now have powers trope, its...dull.
The characters are currently extremely shallow, there is the most strange contrivances and forced behavior. Now trust me I want to enjoy the story but the amount of hand waving required is rather high. Im at the point where its required that I simlly forget about any semblance of logic or reasoning. Heck even just basic plot flow requires me to have immense suspension of disbelief.
Tbe idea has great merit. The method the author uses to slowly change the mc into a monsterous creature is neat. The actjal implementation within tbe story and how the mc and surrounding characters react is not neat. Its dull.
Keep trying author, I am sure you will make it better and better as you go. Just dont force stuff. You want something to happen, ok, them think about the most logical and realistic way it could happen in the world setting. Dont just force things to occur a la deus ex machina, hand wave miracle juice.
Good luck!
This is a great book with a lot of potentials. the character design is good. The plotline is great. but can you tell how did the sword nod when it was not in its human form?