For a new author, the book is quite good. It's easy to follow and enjoy even if you aren't interested in military stuffs. I particularly like the camaraderie between the team. Also the strong bond between the Mc and his family.
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Well the concept is good, too much meta thug lines that's for sure, if you read CN novel much you can skip large amount of the side extra mobs lines they are basically parrot repeating themselves.
MC power feels mediocre to go too deep at cause its just the usual power-gain stuff.
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IMHO : Too much cringeworthy lines, skill name are too much exaggeration *maybe cause MC skills use "dragon"*. If you like no-brainer straightforward power doping MC ig this is your read.
This MC is 100% a masochist. He likes to be abused. He likes to be exploited. All in all, he just likes to be stepped on. Used, and discarded.
Waste of time and effort. As soon as the tournament arc comes it's like a completely different author takes over. Cliches and a complete lack of effort in utilizing the "system".
I don't care what priest types are rare so I'll simp just this once .don't expect much but don't expect too little either just another round of trial reads no exceptional here
Insanity, I don’t know how can you read this stupid novel. The story is non existant and the concept of time is fked up, the MC is lazy as fk, I mean 30 years to only increase in 4 minor lvls..
I don't know about other but feel kind of worthless as i have already read another book by author by name of blind box of real state: i got a divine hint system and the similarity is more than 80%. feel kind of worthless if you have already read one of them.
Really interesting concepts and set up.
Seems like the story has a few too many ideas that are kinda competing with one another while trying to establish what the plot will be about. I keeps things interesting but also a little unfocused.
I feel like the pacing goes a tad too fast at times with too many characters being introduced, too many things happening, and too many rules about how this world works being established one after another.
Probably my advice would be trying to espace out the events a bit and focus more on smaller things like character detail.
We get things like time travel, aliens, people coming back from the dead, robbery... But I find it hard to get invested cause I feel like I know so little about these people.
The dialog also doesn't help. Everyone talks so much but it's mostly exposition explaining what's going on and what they're doing. Dialogs that sometimes go on for gigantic paragraphs.
Meanwhile, the actual events like kidnapping a baby only last for a short while.
I feel there is a need for people to say less and do more, and allow the reader to learn more from those actions .
Exciting characters, fun premise. A nice read on the weekend! I can't wait to see more. This story has so much potential from the little I've read so far. Keep up the great work, writer!
Amazing novel, best of the best this is the first novel I read as the author is one of my friend and I am soo proud of him for writing a novel. The novel itself is great I loved the storyline. Enjoy writing herobrine.