|| This review will only be limited to volume 1 as I will wait for volume 2 to continue reading.
|| Writing Quality [ 4 stars ]: It's good, but there are still a decent amount of grammar errors.
|| Stability of Updates [ 4 stars ]: The release rate is from 2 chapters/day to 1 chapter/2 days. It's quite unstable to be honest.
|| Story Development [ 5 stars ]: The story is interesting as of volume 1, the author did a great job at building the foundation for the main plot. Ellena's development is still too fast in my opinion as personality isn't something easy to fix, considering her past. Overall, the character development is not the best, but I've seen way worse.
|| Character Design [ 5 stars ]: It is good, but you can add a little extra detail ( like the point that is unique to that character ) to improve both the word count and sense of immersion in the story.
|| World Background [ 5 stars ]: Since I've just read volume 1, the world building only centered around 2 towns but it will improve later as this is still the early stages of the story. The world was built brilliantly by the author and the power of 'Ellena' actually went well along with the story
|| Extra opinion: You should absolutely try this story out. I'm sure it will not disappoint you. As for me, I have weak resistance against cliffhangers so I will read after every volume is completed. Total score: 4.6
Flora est la fille de Norman, le champion de l'arène de Clémenti-Ville, et la grande sœur de Max. Elle remplace Ondine durant les saisons 6, 7, 8 et 9 et elle est la première héroïne coordinatrice du groupe de Sacha.Elle a une chanson thématique intitulée « I will not be Defeated! » qui montre bien sa personnalité par rapport au dessin animé.
Me review means me like the novel. I do like to support new authors, or novels.
I give an average so I could write this, this sounds so so fun to read....................................................................................
Dropped at ch 32. This is a very cliche Chinese story, which is made for 15 year old kids. So dont waste time on this novel.
Too much monologue decrease the interest in reading. also the explanation of various things are really vague. MC is more of a passive types with no flirting skills just want to f**k girls,
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I'm writing this second review after catching up to the latest chapter of 404. And my opinion on this series has improved! The slice of life elements are less overdone now and actually feel like they contribute to the character development rather than just being there for the sake of being cute or filler. I also appreciate that the main character and most of the side characters are pure good as a opposed to the chaotic good of most other Pancakeswitch protagonists. This also means that unlike most of them, the evolutions of the main characters of this novel are far more positive and good for the world and less demon lord/cosmic horror/eldritch abomination type evolutions and skills. There's nothing wrong oth that, we've just seen it done a lot in Pancakeswitch novels. It's a nice and welcome change of pace in my opinion. Also, despite the fact that this is one of those novels where the game eventually merges with reality, it doesn't go the typical route you've seen many times before. It's a gradual process and there's a lot of mystery as to why it is happening at all. Definitely check this one out!
I thought I would drop this book after reading the first chapter but the plot and twist of the story got me already hooked. its a nice book to read and I love the story line.
The writing is nice, although there is room for development, such as with certain repeated words that could be replaced with alternatives, etc. Overall, though, I enjoyed reading it, and I would especially recommend this to readers who prefer thiskind of novel.
Is a good novel Man.
I hope hoy Sony drop it
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Hmm, this was a very odd novel to read. We are given the background that the MC is someone who is slightly insane/unhinged. Or at least, should be. But reading through I realized the author has no idea how to convey this. Show, don't tell. Never once does the MC seem crazy to me. He is called crazy but that's it. The fact that he wanted the ML to die in arc 1 doesn't make him crazy.
The character doesn't behave like his set-up at all, which makes the entire thing meaningless. None of the character's are interesting either which is a shame because I could see some get really intriguing.