BigMun
MC is not God of Harem, he is God of CUCKS...
He is also a masochist, maybe not the MC but the author.
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It seemed interesting, but things happen so quickly and so randomly that I can't even understand. The world has no development at all, I don’t know what the character’s objective is, I don’t know how animal contracts work (Although it looks like a pokemon), I don’t even understand this system that appears to be very OP but whose 100x amplification follows a strange logic, and the characters are just fillers and clichés. Maybe it's cool to pass the time, but it's not memorable and it doesn't even reach the feet of other novels of the same genre
Boring just boring im suprised that some people actually like this thing(Yes a thing i can't even call it a novel)
it's a typical wish fulfilment MC
i got bored so fast reading this i can't even past chapter 09
wonderful wording it's very detailed. Love everything about your book hope you have a great day and continue making stories such as this one. [img=update][img=recommend]
Wtf is a bread shuttle?
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the best.
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Story is pretty good. The way that he awakens his powers may make you want to turn from the story but if you just ignore that the rest of the story is pretty good so far. I would recommend giving it a shot.
Thank you Taintedmetal for this collection of interesting experience.it did at some point felt relevant to everyday lIfe. The stories reflect just drawn thoughts of the author probably a series of them which i find with a lot of humor at the begining which is lIght for laughter and the at the middle which could be related to real life experience and the a little deep in thought part in the end and closing. i find the part when Cynthia punch Diah hillarious i was laughing out loud. The letters back and forth interesting. And you finding the two voLunteers to be cannabalised through the “web” - good use of pulling reading through different dimensions. it’s like and makes a reader laugh over it
Hi! This is Molly, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
Even though at first it feel like a typical weak to strong stories there is something in this book that is not in other books of same genre, the world ground. Compared to the other novels the world background is different in this book making it standout. With a little editing this will become an outsatnding book t o read!!!
Hi ,
This is Shirley, I am an editor an editor of a digital writing platform- D R EA M E.
After reading your book, I decided to contact you and if possible, to extend you an invitation on distributing your works. However, there are so little I can talk about it here. If you were interested, please contact me via [email protected]
, then I should take opportunity to discuss it with you in detail.
It was a great pleasure to meet your story.
Sincerely
Shirley
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
