This is one of the best cultivation novel I've recently read. Good character development, excellent word buliding, unique systems, cool fights, op mc along with op enemies and many more. And also clear explanations on cultivation, different races, man this novel is excellent. I so hope that the author won't drop this novel.
Review time, 19 chapters.MC transmigrated into this world where there are beast tamers. Humans in a precarious situation. blablabla, cliche background.Mc has a SSS-rank nuturing talent, so as long he has enough resources he can grow any type of beast to extreme levels. Any nuturing beast tamer or in general (forgot) has a sort of storage space in their body where the beasts will rest. Sort of like a pokeball.The higher your talent the more space you would have. Due that mc has SSS-rank talent the beasts in his space will grow 256 times faster than normal.Mc has a normal functioning brain.Translation quality: 5* (as always - didn't seem to find anything wrong here)SoU: 5* (as always)Story Development: 3* (Plot is the same)Character design: 3* (no soul, no emotions, just a blank page full of cliche designs)World background: 3* (Again, stolen template, you can already guess the background without even reading anything but the title)Overall score: 3.8Personal score: 4.0 (It's actually pretty nice, I wouldn't say at the top of these types of novels but still entertaining to a certain extent. Give it a try - you're bored anyway if you're reading trial novels)
Looks like this has a better translation than the other reviews indicate. Not sure if something changed since they left their reviews or what. Overall, it seems like a pretty good story. I find the MC to be really entertaining. Yes, there is a system, but I think the MC's personality so far at least makes it interesting. Same with many of the other characters especially the sect leader.
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This is the author with a shameless 5 star review (I don't think there is any author who wouldn't give his story 5 stars) so I'll review it in steps. MAIN CHARACTER-The protagonist Rey is a genius with an idiotic behaviour and is quite annoying. I also get annoyed by him. But there is a backstory which I hope to explore and there is a reason for his actions, so if you could bear with him. It is not weak to strong because the mc is already strong but there will be change in his attitude and behaviour which will help him become a better version of himself. The MC will not be completely op for now, might change depending on what I feel and what you guys say.PLOT-The plot, to understand easily will be like a vrmmorpg but in a real world without any tower or dungeons (if that makes it easier). There are many novels in which there is a system that can talk but I wanted to create a system which is very much human and isn't defined by the system rules, so the plot for me is pretty interesting. WRITING-Now this is tricky. I won't say I am good or what I have written is good because I still don't think what I have written is good enough. So that is something you guys will have to read and decide. But I do know that 50 chapters later the writing won't be the same cause I will try to improve on it. PACING-I honestly don't know whether I am going slow or fast because I try to be as descriptive as possible so that you as readers can imagine what I am thinking and that might make it slow paced. I am fairly new, so sometimes it might be fast or sometimes slow. ROMANCE-There won't be a harem and romance will not be coming anytime soon. Though there is and the first to guess, I'll add your character in the story.
This book is pure gold. Two Teachers, two students, and two systems. Author you are a amazing writer. Keep it up. I wish you good luck my friend.
It is written in an entertaining enough way, but the MC’s behavior is often weird and doesn’t make sense when you consider that he was 18 before reincarnating. My main issue is a bit further on. Stop now if you want to avoid spoilers.
His dark magic teacher decides to put a slave collar on him and have him do manual labor for her, while spending nights torturing him with dark magic to build resistance. After of a year of this she also trains him with a spear. Compared to all of his other teachers, who asked consent, and actually taught him properly, he is most grateful to her! On top of that, he feels guilty for being mad at her for the enslavement. I was willing to give it a chance at first but that was the final straw.
honestly love it right now, most of the time when a story is about a dragon their family always end up dead and even the ones that don't the MC never wants to spend time with his family and before they see them again they are dead, so I hope this story isn't dark like that, just want it to be a slightly mysterious, low-ish action, warm hearted, 4th dimensional dragon story.
I leave this review because I really like the novel. I like the story, the characters, the game and many more.
I know that I can't do better review. So, I'm sorry if this is not helping.
Always been eagerly waiting for the new novels by this author.
This story is very well written and doesn't feel like a translation at all (not sure if it is or not). It has a very different style compared to a lot of other novels here.
There is a unique style of introducing the characters & the world. Very intriguing plot! I'm excited to find out what happens when they get to Vegas.
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow?
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