There should be a #Harlem and #incest. I guess some people will like it, but I feel there is so much pointless pornographic chapters. Understand the author is growing. However in some ways the earlier chapters were better crafted
I honestly enjoy the story concept and character building. But I got to say there is a lot of POV problems, not sure if it’s meant to be a technic but, the switching of a female character between him and her is confusing. Then there are these sentences structure and strange word choice. At times I felt like I was reading a raw google translation.
For me It has started to drag. I also wonder if the author will be able to remember all these character and build them. The author keeps creating what appears to be important character but stops using them, or appears sporadically. I still enjoy the story and will support but... I have less expectations now.
In my opinion this is the very best novel on QI and ist doesn't get as much attention as it deserves.
The MC is really likeable and the concept is something new and different.
There are no cliches and every Arc is nice top read, even if the only thing described is he's daily Life. View More
Story concepts are decent the in game world is okay
but overall the story givers the feeling of being a naïve 15 year old boy's fantasy. The mc is a bit dim and the girls are all simple, easy and gullible, supposed to be based in America but it doesn't feel like the author has even read about the country and so doesn't understand the culture, social norms, economy, politics etcetera it feels more like a weird China or Korea
I'm at chapter 144, and I want to like the story because the idea is cool, but between the inconsistencies, plot holes, shallow emotionless characters, bulky plot armor and jarring disconnect between the setting and the culture I'd rather spend my coins elsewhere...
Damn beautiful concept. We had Vrmmos, We had Mc reincarnating in game worlds as players, We had novels with Mc becoming NPC in a game world with players. But We never had a Mc becoming God of freaking games and creating players.
It's a very good novel and perfect for me.... Thanks author and editor (if any)....
I have only read first
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This story is amazing the plot is ground breaking, In my opinion. On top of that the main character back ground is not that bad. If you want a good novel to start of with, I recommend this novel.
I should say I am pretty impressed with the story and its progress.
The author is really creative, to involve a lot of things and still manage to keep up a good story... its 5 stars from me.
Fans who are fed up with the routine isekai's, give this a go.......
Also, there is a lot of fan service, so people could enjoy reading it...twice or thrice or more than that (especially R-rated fans, I would say this fills your thirst XD)
This novel came up as recommendation.I was wondering if I should read it. The plot was different so I thought I’ll give it go. I have to say that I am glad I did. Its very interesting and different. And I enjoyed reading so far. Read 10 chapters. Can’t Wait for more ??????
This MC is fucking hilarious with every step causing misunderstanding and you will cheers for him such amazing Novel right there and the interaction between him and the world is so funny
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