I like your book, have a good story. I'll vote every day your work and i have 3 accounts to do that ........................................
this pretty much interesting, lot of novel as this but this is worth to read at your spare time, it's refreshing, I just found first chapter quite entertaining and so far it's great!
Normally I wouldn’t complain about naming because that’s the authors choice but with this novel I can’t tell if everyone is men with feminine names or if this is actually a female protagonist with the wrong pronouns due to a translation problem.
All in all a really enjoyable story mc is like the real Pain seeking world peace and creating the akatsuki but not a carbon copy of him. I like that there's no harem since its typical for mha fanfic and harem ruins the romance when a story has it. The author creates his own scenarios and isn't heavily reliant on the main scenarios in the anime which are the ua villian invasion, the stain attack, the training camp attack, the all for one fight and the overhall fight. Also I miss the mc's god complex but people were complaining so the author gave up on it. its definitely one of the best if not the best mha fanfic I've ever read. keep up the good work author.
Alright i read 20 chapters in, and yeah its quite solid especially with the author clarifying its their first rodeo i believe. Now its not without its faults, lets get the big hurdle out of the way, the main character is a big mary sue. Not really a spoiler as around 18 chapters in its revealed hes had "sword and gun training" and that he was " a genius" who quit because he found it boring. Not to mention his perfect figure and attractive features the first chapter in. Look, you can enjoy this for what it is especially when there is a lot worst, there are no overbearing cliches here. Well aside from Mr Perfect MC. He does struggle but at a superficial level. Also minor gripe, his actions and thoughts being somewhat contradictory? He thinks others are a burden while risking his hide for an inhaler, that isnt to say human beings aren't flexible and contradictory in nature. So thats not really a major issue but i felt it should atleast be addressed. OH, lets talk about the only female 20 chapters in who's an office worker who coincidentally is a kendo three time championship who also coincidentally has a kantana sword becuase coincidentally it was her first day on the job... Idk it could happen but very unlikely and it just had me rolling my eyes E N ways thats about it. Have a good one.
I hate this stockpile thing. If u want a stockpile Bonus chapter that is ok but where is usual everyday chapters ...............................
im enjoying the story so far...hopefully their will be an update everyday w/ more than 1 chapter too :)
This is a very good story. I've read all the chapters to date but I'm not mooking forward to slow releases. Please author release more per day than 1 or 2.
This is an awesome book. But I have read all them so far. Looking forward to more from you.
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Love this book
this book need to come to the end too draw out its losing the excitement