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Sci-Fi is not really my cup of tea but this is great and interesting. The sotry is very immersive and I could see that you Author did a lot of background research for this. I really like this and I'm going to add this to my library and wait for more chapters!
Honestly the author gave up on this book and gave it a very abrupt ending witch was total garbage. If you want to read this be prepared for a very rushed and trash ending
Honestly cant recommend this novel enough, Victorian based setting with a 'magic' backdrop, there are multiple realms with a similar world of earth being the focus so far with elemental control being the main themes in magic, with another 'typical' chinese xianxia realm with cultivation, spirit roots sects etc. Novel so far is not focused on becoming strong as character are already very strong for the setting, and is more focused on solving mysteries and interacting with the magical 'government' if you will.updates every day, quite a lot of world building and a good development so far, with each main character being quite fleshed out.
This is no doubt a great series possibly one of the best on the website the only downside is the updates they are kind of inconsistent. 5/5 for everything other then the updates 3/5 for that
Author took down most of the story to sell on amazon. Not high enough quality for that...................................................................
I love fantasy and the involvement of fairies and elves and royalties. I know it's kind of cliché since it has been quiet so many years since fairytales have been around but somehow, I am entertained by this story. It's a classical story for me but it's still good. Hope to read it to its end.
I think it is still to early to comment on the story development, since not much of a do over has happened to the mc situation. Needs more revision, I cannot bring myself to give a five star, too many areas need improvement. I wouldn't call this a success, but we all have to start somewhere. Keep working on your skills. don't give up!Peace& Love .
All the preview chapters are filled with begging for stones and coins to unlock the first chapter with any actual content. This author is obviously Being pushed up by the app if he can get so many positive Reviews with the novel in the state its in. He literall stated in the second chapter that he wont post anything if his precived level of appropriate support is not met. Entitled without proof of skill sir.
KillerHemboy is back! He posted an update in this novel. He might continue this novel at the beginning of 2022. idk. Just glad to know he's not dead.
So the grammar is good as far as I have read, and although this is not the genre I usually go for, I must say that this book is worth complimenting! Keep up with the good work!
Dont be in a hurry to rush your chapters bro... Enjoy writing your story as ive enjoyed reading it also... Keep up the good work and have a nice day....................