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Echidna : "That's correct. However, you and your friend aren't the only ones that originate from The Garden of Eden. It's highly rumored that Contessa was one as well. The Washuu King is from the Garden of Eden as well. That makes four, and there are probably one or two more left that I am not sure about."
- "I thought they were a legend..."- said Luke who even though has never crossed paths with these kind of creatures, he had heard stories about them and if they were true then this battle would be incredibly complicated- "Yuuzhan Vong..."
Adam didn't quite understand what had happened, but he understood that the bird and him were now companions. He didn't really hate the idea, so he accepted it.
"I know right, but she is here for me not you brother. So you are more of a chaperone. Sorry...." Sera explained and left him to talk to Analyze.
What's interesting in this story is the protagonist's life. Indeed, he used to be the top magician, but his life was incredibly desolate. Upon being reborn, even though he starts without any power, he's in a warm family that supports and loves him, even though he's considered useless. This is another reason why I find myself rooting for the protagonist and wanting to read more about his family scenes.
READ THIS. ASAP.Early few reviews will make you question should you read it or not, well the answer YES.so, every author has different way to write and present their story all I will say it this one is super 'ENTERTAINING', you will definitely enjoy this.
Shaping up to be a good story. Don't let any mean comments get you down as you continue to write. Over time, everything will fall into place. My only advice is trying to not make the MC too overpowered too fast, or the side characters too mindless or uninteresting.All in all, keep up the good work ?
Good evening and once again, but no less important: Thank you for the chapter. As for this story, I admit that at first I didn't have high expectations. I thought it would be difficult for a tree to captivate me as much as Yasenia, but I was positively surprised. Liu Shu also has charisma and the chapters are a lot of fun to read. The different ways of thinking between the races and the pink fairies themselves are great attractions in this story and also add a lot of tension to the plot. (Example: As much as the pink fairies want to defend Liu Shu and are willing to die in this effort. They're not as strong as the maids and Tatiana, so I'm much more apprehensive about the tree and the lovely pink fairies than I am about the Dragon. Who, in addition to her own strength and cunning, still has Tatiana, Valeria, Mirror, Maids, Harem... and a whole range of allies). I kind of underestimate that Yasenia will cope with whatever the Heavens throw at her, but Liu Shu won't. Yasenia's ability is a trait developed from her efforts and I really like this hard-working MC that our Dragon is. But I have to admit that Liu Shu's naivety and fragility also have their charms. In short, you're writing two very good stories with immensely different but equally captivating protagonists.-Suzushiro
I must say this is pretty interesting. The characters are alive and the story got me hooked up. I am looking forward for the next update. Cheers!
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