I really really hope you don't give up on this because it's just checks all my boxes the only reason you got to lower scores because I had to be honest about your updating schedule
please rawit seems interesting the plot seems good
i liked this novel until 90 chapters then his thinking just kills me. he thinks wyvern more powerful than true dragon and the dragons are weaker than other lower races. seriously, dragons are one of the strongest creatures.
yesterday i thought i had seen everything, today i saw a fanfic with pay wall.
What kind of world are we going to leave for the next generations ...?
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Synopsis is a little off, He doesn’t get his seal broken bu just waking up one day, It will probably take him quite some time to break it. The story is okay so far, The Mc is being forced by circumstances to move along but And doesn’t have much of a choice. I hope the story gets better and he isn’t just forced to do things like the usual asian novels.
Compared to the 'First' novel, this novel's quality is lower..... It seems to me that this is just added flavor after the end of the king's avatar novel.
What I expect when I saw the novel is a 'real' prequel..... Of course what I expect to see is when Ye Xiu decided to run from home to play games to meeting Su siblings then to their rise in glory and then the creation of esports of glory then to the creation of team excellent era of course with Tao Xuan, Manager Cui, Ye Xiu, Su Mu Qiu (from a group of people from a computer shop to pro team) and Wu Xuefeng and to Su Mu Qiu's death and then to Ye Xiu's resolve to win championship for them....
This is what a prequel is (IMO) and not a how-they-meet-up and time-skips of fight....
Also because of the many time skips, there are many feelings and emotions that aren't portrayed just like how Butterfly Blue portrayed the feelings and emotions of the players in the middle of the novel......
It felt that this novel is kinda rushed, just like the ending of the novel of origin....
I'm really disappointed given the hype of this new novel after the ending of the mother novel....
*sigh~~
But still, all in all, I will still continue to read this since my score has nothing to do with the fact that I WANT MORE OF KING'S AVATAR!!
And the enjoyment I got is still higher than what my score suggests....
What my score meant is my disappointment in my rant above..
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Author really good job in describing the world. Also, the novel is well written, it makes me jealous. Your choice of words are amazing.
Keep up the good work and hope you gain more fans!
Grammar is awful. Just awful. There’s also some unrealistic scenes like bidding for an item from an arcade machine, but I guess getting a system is unrealistic as well so that’s ignorable.
The grammar definitely needs improvements, and the choices of the characters felt stupid, but that's okay, as long as you actually improve it will be good.
This would be continued after a long time.I like Apocalypse but I can't write it~~~~ too hard. I'm short of action words...but I still love it. Kudos for me lol
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