It's rather impressive that the author managed to make the mc have a white knight complex, while also simping for almost everything of the female gender. Did I mention he seems to get killed randomly and then they continue on their day as if he wasn't just murdered. Mc's "Girlfriend" included.
Of course I've only read til chapter 20, But I would rather eat glass then continue reading this abomination of human rights.
The only compliment I can give is that the translation is readable.
First 10 chapter is good, after that is ok I guess, but the real problems is bad grammar. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ..
Raw.
Raw. Raw. Raw. Raw. Raw. Raw. Raw raw. Raw. Raw.
Raw plz
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was pretty good, but then changed to locked chapters, we dont get many free passes, even with membership, its cheaper to just look on other sites
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Vampire > 3D girls
I would give this a power stone if I could, but I used up all of mine! As the comments below have said, this is a great story, and I think it deserves a chance from yall!
Imma just go ahead and leave a review even though there arent many chapters. So far this is pretty good, I like the gacha system and the grammar is pretty clean. I do like how the MC is working towards the core formation realm and then setting up a sect. He isnt given a run down sect nor a cultivation base at the beginning. I dont mind that he drew a rare cultivation method which alloes him to level up faster because it was his first draw and those draws are always luckier than others. Anyways, thanks for taking the time to write this novel Author.
This is so bad the protagonist literally just helps everyone he meets. This is so bad the protagonist literally just helps everyone he meets. This is so bad the protagonist literally just helps everyone he meets. This is so bad the protagonist literally just helps everyone he meets. This is so bad the protagonist literally just helps everyone he meets. This is so bad the protagonist literally just helps everyone he meets. This is so bad the protagonist literally just helps everyone he meets. This is so bad the protagonist literally just helps everyone he meets. This is so bad the protagonist literally just helps everyone he meets.
why cut a chapter in four parts? if you cut a chapter in four parts then release it at the same time!!!! i miss the long old chapters........