Nice. Hope similar work keep coming. I hope author can complete the story as more suspense keep bubbling. Overall I think it is a good story.
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Aside from it being an entertaining and a time killer, this story blends sci-fi and mystery really well. If you like both of those genres then this book deserves you're attention. Great job author keep it up!!!
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The author has done a great job carving and molding such unique and spectacular characters. And the tale itself is so well spun, It’s hard to stop reading. Great job.
Well, it's full of the same things you see in cultivation novels all the time. My problem with this novels is the cheat. It said on the tin that the MC can get a return from x2 to x10000 cultivation. until now, when MC cultivated for about 1-2 months he only got 100 about 3 times as the highest. if you put 10000 numbers in a RNG there is less then 1% to get less then 100 so consistently. Let's not talk about the stupidity of cultivating for days and then transferring said cultivation at only x10 when he could cultivate 1 hour - transfer. if the chance was truly random, for every hour he would gain from 2 to 10000 hours of cultivation, which can be repeated 12 times in a day(assuming he does other human things in the other 12). Sadly, smart MC make for low word count....
The idea is nice but the grammar is so bad i dont know what is happening. I suggest using grammarly. Im four chapters in and no sign of chatroom or whatever and utterly confused
Still in my heart number 1 don't care what people say. hope you return soon.
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Author-san here, shamelessly giving my review!
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This time, my system might have taken a turn for the worst
Im suprised this novel doesn’t have more views it really good story at least so far. Can’t be sure if it will stay that way only time will tell and keep up the good work author.
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Interesting novel with some clichés. The tempo of events is good and the plot and events makes you want to know what happens next. The only downside for me at least is the tendency of the author in repeating the explanations of certain issues or situations over and over again. This makes the chapters full of filler words and paragraphs.
♡ Cultivation system with a OP MC. As long as the MC isn't overly boastful for no reason but to assert his dominance, the story will hopefully be enjoyable.
♤ However, considering the name of the systeme, it's definitely goind to be a face slapping novel. Moreover, the MC might not have to face any hardships which would result in no character development and the plot will go nowhere.