Good shiih continue maaaan it amazing
Alright, let's not look at the narcissist rating I gave to my novel, but get to the main topic. I am re-writing this novel. The previous time I wrote it, I took a big break in the middle and in that break I thought of various ideas and stuff and finally, when I came back, I thought of rewriting all of it. If you are new to this novel, I can assure you that you will have a great time reading this and won't be disappointed.
Author here. I am here shamelessly to give my own work with 5* :) and explain a bit about the story.
Our Mc is sealed for an unknown time, but when he woke up and broke the seal, he realized he was in a foreign land. Later, slowly but surely, our Mc will find out how he end up in this foreign land (Earth). He will slowly uncover the mysteries Earth experienced such as the catastrophe 600 years ago and so on. Please be patient with the slow start :)
I hope you enjoy my second work or maybe third? Nevermind, hope you enjoy my story :)
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Nice story idea and characters. That's about all I can praise this story for. Narration is incredibly convoluted, and the story reads more like an attempt at hero's diary than a novel. If you hate novels where autor has to note out POV changes, this isn't for you since the story has no "flow". Might be a decent binge-read at +-150 chapters.
This novel manages to blend a sophisticated narrative style with entertaining dialogue, which is quite the feat. The setting of this story is wonderfully described, and the characters are memorable. Development wise, this story seems to be taking things slowly (very slice of life like), and that's not bad at all. It allows us readers to get familiar with the characters and their world. In short, I'd def recommend this novel if you're interested in a gaming novel. Keep up the good work author :D
I love this book is a master piece with direct and precise words from the very beginning to the end every bit of it good work keep it up,this is always what we ask for not novel filled with fillers .
This was a surprisingly good read, espesally because I'm way more into fantasy type novels. But a good read overall. ???
First off the main character has strong human morality. Which doesn't make sense at times.(The main character kills most other living creatures but when 2 very young (guessing 14 yo) These girls come along he feels a great sexual urge and doesn't touch them. Awhile later he now made her lose her memory and touches her while she is sleeping.. Then there is a bunch of cognitive dissonance he has and he is very stupid. And all the other animals he has is actually alright. Except for the fact a creature 2 times stronger than him is subservient.
It's an alright novel, good idea but doesn't really stack up. My main problems come during chap 29 - 30. The "village" if you can call it that has the counsel house, bandit hideout, and 5 houses. If you read ANY kingdom-building novel then you understand at the start everyone pulls there weight to help build the foundation. However, the Author ignores all this and is already trying to build the currency. This is by far the stupidest thing I've seen and has annoyed tf outta me. It's not even the worst part, he pays the military and bandits but then ignores the normal workers, the farmers etc how does this make sense? Also, he then gives out all the food etc for free without putting a price on them. Doing this, why tf is he paying his people than when there is nothing to buy? You're literally just giving money away to someone who it will hold no value to. Instead of investing it to build up the foundations more and giving them better-living conditions. Adding onto this he is not treating everyone equally by just paying the military witch will then lead to outrage. He then wonders how he is so fcking broke. Another thing that is stupid is that the only way he can gain more of the money easily is to trade mystical items to the system which is explained as cornerstones of kingdoms, clans, empires.... No need for me to explain how stupid this is.Finally, the last straw for me is when he traded his food supply for a tiny bit of money that he shouldn't have even lost in the first place. For a village that was wondering how they will survive for more than 13 days to then trade their food supply for money (which the villagers have), it just doesn't make sense to me... food is essential for tiny villages. Adding onto this further any situation the mc finds himself in even if he himself from his own stupidity got him there is magically worked out by the system. Other than these things it was a great novel with an interesting idea. I loved the idea of a magical kingdom in the desert hidden from all. Plus it was interesting what lay further in the desert and the enemies witch lay near. Just couldn't stand the stupidity that I mentioned before.
This is too early to judge as there are only 21 chapters released but I would like to say although not new but interesting concept. Author will have to work hard on improving MC's personality. Previously he was timid, everybody stepped on him, ignored him. Now since he's overpowered I don't wish for him to suddenly chage his personality like a switch but gradual improvement.Comming to the story, synopsis says it all. MC is useless in his world and even after he goes to other world. When it's time to return to his world, time freezes. MC hunts the immobile monsters to gain levels and become stronger. The instant dungeon arc was a little boring although it was short.Hope the story keeps getting better. I guess MC will soon return to his world and face everyone where he will surprise them.
I am still reading halfway through it, maybe on chapter 20s, but i would like to give a review first. Scifi was not my fav genre, but this... this is good! Its details, plots, and developments of it are cool and all! If any of you are a scifi lover, please read this one!! Recommended! Good work author! Keep it up!