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Excellent decision to add unreadable codes for objects so he has to scan it first.. removes most of the OP setting he can't create anything he wants willy nilly.. like say, add enchants, potion effects and basically creative mode if there is one.. hope he achieves that in the end and he'll truly be in god mode right there
Hello Author here!First, I would like to say that I don't have much vocabulary. I'm still an ******* and my grades in English subj were lower than you could have imagined. So some words kept repeating but I guarantee you that I've already planned this whole story. I've already had all that Arcs and the Ending in my notebook(I've wrote it there at the back of my math notebook). I think for for those people who like reading adventures and action will like my novel. This will be a full action story... Probably...Hais... I don't know what I was saying anymore. Well, thanks for reading and I will accept all the criticism with open arms. Good luck! I hope you enjoy it! I truly truly hope that you enjoy it, no, I wish that you enjoy it.
there is nothing interesting about this novel.everything has been done before.at first it was funny to read his antics but those got old really quick and then the frustration of the mc never taking anything serious kicks in.