I really hope you don't abandon this,
It's such a good story
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I kind liked the Description but I can't say I will like the novel but maybe it will surprise me
It is neither good or bad. I got to chapter 60. The novel can be divided into 2 parts: the IRL and game. I will also say I usually like video game novels, so it is rather mediocre and I mean it.
The game portion is okay, but not super great. Not much that separates it from other novels or makes it super great.
The IRL, to put it bluntly, is just terrible (the book starts really bad because it starts with unfathomable situations in IRL). Super minor spoiler, in one of the first couple chapters there is a plane crash and he gets hit by part of the debris. Realistically he would die by being hit, and even if the hit would not kill him, the way the *thing* hit him would. The other IRL stuff is pretty dumb, fast moving, and random at best.
All that i saw nice in this novel was the different cultivation system, the rest being cliche and everything other xianxia generic type novels offer. What I see as a shame is that this novel has more fans then The Cell Prison that is something different in the good sense because after a while you get bored of generic bull*hit. Sometimes I question the reading taste of people...don t you get bored of the same type of novel with no innovation, again and again?
The latest chapters have been amazing. I am really wondering which direction the future plot will go. The parts where Fang Yuan has been portrayed has been carried out perfectly.
After having spent something around probably over 1000 or so hours reading webnovels and really seeing something this well done and complex makes me really happy. please arthur if you read this please dont drop this book it is amazing!
It actually not bad if the author has not dropped. Hope the author comes back to finish it one day. Right now, there are only spam reviews.......
SHAMELESS REVIEW FROM THE AUTHOR!!
Or not exactly shameless...Well,in any case, I wrote this book about four days ago.
When I saw the WFP for the week was about Second Chances, I was like 'Holy sh*t I always wanted to write one of these!' so I started this book and joined the contest.
Anyway if anyone likes this book, It'd be great help if you comment or make a review so I could see where I am lacking.
And also, have a good day
wow this piece of work is truly so intriguing!
This novel just had me kept reading but I needed to review it (◠‿◕)
so here goes-
A intricately tailored plotline with enticing concept, well designed characters consisting individual personalities, plot thickens with every chapters and occasionally leaves the readers wondering whats next?, the novel has mystery, humour, action, adventure, thrill,fun and furthermore the instances of an apocalypse are described well keeping the readers attention hooked!
You are a great author and I love both of your current books. You have a amazing writing quality and really good story development.The characters are well done and the Mc is likeable. I think you should post daily otherwise the update stability is good.The world background is interesting. He has a lot of knowledge about the world and is using it for his advantage. It will also be interesting to see how he interacts with people he has only read about like most of the heavenly opposers .
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