Nice start and good story. Ihope to see the next one soon.
And i hope you continue this story. You have my support author.
And damm u 140 character review!!?
as someone who dosent actualy enjoy fishing I find ur story enjoyable so far and I hope u stick to the whole fishing thing uv got going on on 5 chapters in so that's why I gave u all 4s not really enough to properly judge for most of them catagories yet
nice plot .... great chara.. .. . perfect world setting . .. it makes me wanna read and keep read
noice yandere
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This novel in one word, stable. The writing quality has been are throughout the entire 700 odd chapters thus far. Being detailed where it needs to be. This novel excels in word choice and more.Updating stability deserves a 5/5. Its stable. Nothing more needs to be said.Story development. This is for those who don’t want a quick story. It is slow, but each chapter builds upon something. It sets up brilliant foundations although the end goal is still elusive, if there is one, it does well with general building.Character Design. Though there is a lot of them, which does cause issues with developing so many Lifesketcher does a great job. Slowly giving each character in this story something that makes them unique.World background: In my opinion, this is what the author excels the most at. A lot of thought has gone into how this Universe/realms etc works. Although this might be a bit too much for some.Overall this is one of the better novels I’ve read on this platform. Although it will not be everyone’s cup of tea, for those who enjoy this type of novel, the author does honor to it.- :)
A bit sad that the book is stuck on chap 40 but looking forward to reading more from you.Loved the story and hoping to see more chapters very soon.
I have been into video games for a while and to be honest, I am absolutely amazed by seeing what the book has to offer. It may have a few weak points here and there but I think it would do amazing with better editing.
best of luck author san
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I love this book, the fiction portrayed is absolutely amazing, I like the way the characters are depicted, I definitely recommend this book, the author has done a great job with this story
Trash, it's simple as that, it's every Summoned beast with system novel but turned to trash. You add in fat friend + word count abuse + general trash gag + it's sh* = this.
Really enjoying this book. Has been one of my favourites so far on this site. Only wish there was more.
Some small grammatical errors that need fixing but not enough to affect the story or lose a whole star in its category.
Just wish GhostyZ’s name wasn’t similar so I would have read this earlier haha