"Shut up! Now is not the time to be concerned about me! Heal Liuyun now while I suppress his powers!"
After fusing together, his strength return, now that the Fire God clan think he is dead, he will use that to his advantage.
[Faction joined: Wandering Sect
Not bad, the main characters is pretty quirky but I like his character.I feel like Rose still needs a bit more development but she's good so far, her reactions are pretty realistic. I like this novel. is this a system novel by any chance??
The concept of Outcasts is brilliant and the writing style is top level. I won't reveal anything about the plots but I must say this that the main protagonist's character development looks far more better than any of the characters. Strange powers, the brilliant plot designs along with overall world building that has so much potential to surpass many of the top novels. I hope that you get contracted soon or accepted by webnovel if you ever apply for the contract. Well done and keep going. Thats's it...
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Despite having technical errors in the chapters, the author still was able to convey the premise of the story to me and elaborate it through character development, action-reaction, and conflict.I like how you incorporated first person perspective and having the balance of thought and plot. Many authors that tried to write like that often failed to convey such a simple premise. You did just fine.
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Nyghtwryter here, just wanted to thank you all for checking out the first draft of TLPOR. I gave my self a lower rating since I know my writing could use some improving and I’m brutally honest with myself.Anyways, I thought at first I could rewrite a lot of content in 2 months, but it’s taking me a lot longer than I thought, to finish rewriting just one chapter, so it may be around 3-4 months, realistically to come back with enough to drop everyday. I will at the same time, begin writing the sequel, Atlas’s Origins, during my free time. Not sure where I’ll post it, but I’ll make sure, to let y’all know!TLDR: Rewrite coming in 3-4 months Atlas’s Origins (Sequel) coming soon
So far I haven't found anything wrong about the novel, in fact I kinda like reading it (or it must be due to me having the taste in this kind of genre.). the writing was so vivid that it made me immerse in the author's novel world. the mc had a great character design, too. the problem is the writing stability which is easy to fix so the author can rest assure.
This book has it all, the engaging plot, wonderful characterization and a writing style that manages to hold your interest and supply you with information without confusing you. Loved what I've read so far, going to my library for more reading later. Good job author. ?