a novel where above 15chapter is a new world introduce every chapter though the world is 1 chapter only and it is rush introducing the plot from the movie or books then change only a few things inserting mc presence in the plot and ordering people taking leadership role of the heroes and world making sure mc doing something on the chapter so the chapter can be send out some of the female characters quickly fell in love with mc by meeting him half a day maybe less and over all it is an ok novel if you want a super fast pace novel
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This storys premise is delightful except for the fact that i have no idea what is going on or what anyone saying or what theyre doing. Kid gets abducted because some people said theyd guve his parents money and hes like “sure” doesnt question anything. Then when theyre explaining there objectives within the worlds the dont feel coherent. This feels like it might continue to be a prevalent issue and while I understand that english might not be your first language I cannot reccomend this in good conscience.
The novel is fantastic, I love the novel??? it very interesting please author try and update more am anticipating your next update, getting excited??????
