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First of all excuse me if there are mistakes english is not my native language. What I can say about this story is that for now it is well written, the characters and the plot is well constructed. The fights are well described without being too surrealist so I like that. For finished I hope that the author continues like that both for the frequency of these updates and for the quality of its plot.
Overall it's pretty decent, with fun and likable characters and a somewhat interesting world. Though the dialogue feels bad since they talk exposition most of the time, it is still an enjoyable read.There are a few issues with the writing, as there are sometimes missing or misplaced commas, periods, apostrophes, and etc. Along with some missing words.Though it's not a big deal as I can still understand it, it does ruin the flow and takes you out of the book.I recommend using grammarly and a bit of proofreading.
I've read through this twice the early chaps have some small mistakes however it gets better as you go the fact this is the authors first story is understandable nothing is perfect Jason is a good guy and tries his best if or when the author continues this is the day I continue to read.
I don’t know where the author disappeared to but this was quite interesting. Definitely recommend............................................
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Interesting i Will Comeback to reading this again. can't wait the next chapter...... .
Cliche novel with op cheats, but still cliche.............................................................................................................
Review chap 150 Well already know that I was very mixed at the beginning, it goes much too fast for my taste and the first "Tier" are quickly skipped, nevertheless from chapter 100~, things start to become interesting, the novel take a normal pace ...Well clearly I think the author didn't want to do TLM and make 300 chapter where the hero is as weak as the others, but I understand why some people give up...For my part I liked it, I even bought the privilege because now it's really great!
Boring just boring im suprised that some people actually like this thing(Yes a thing i can't even call it a novel)it's a typical wish fulfilment MC i got bored so fast reading this i can't even past chapter 09
I have read my fare share of trash and this is among the top, wonderful premise and the author took a hot and scalding dump on it, don't waste your time.
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