This is the beginning of something amazing! The characters are relatable and the story is progressing wonderfully. Would recommend this to everyone!
Amazing novel! Keep up the good work! Can't wait for more chapters to release! And don't keep us hanging, dear author! I read everything in one go, but can't wait now!
I'm sorry but you are wayyyyy of your mark thereI can't say anything because it is still currently some 500-800 chapters away, but damn bro what you are writing about is just straight up wrong. But kudos tho for the writing itself. It's just the details doesn't match up with the original story that it becomes such a turn off
Its a good novel typical but interesting
This story has really slow story development witch is not always bad, but really 18th chapter and Hi don't even tame any beast ??? Chapters are probably not to short, but you probably should change your writing style a little bit. You should make you're chapters more eventful. You should think about what is needed for this story and what is not. You give a lots of unnecessary information, witch don't deepen the protagonist character, and don't make make you're world more immersive. As a example I can gave you "Pure Love x Insult Complex" witch start at April 24th and is translated until May 6th in novel world witch takes 12 days, but these twelve days take up as many as 540 chapters, which is amazing because each of these chapters contains some interesting event or deepens the protagonist character. So you should really think what information are essential for you're story, because unnecessary information slows down the development of the story. I think you should read some theories about writing and construction of the plot. After these remarks, you probably think that I do not like your story, but I was heaving fun reading you're story, and as Your fan I want to contribute some advice. Sorry for my mistakes in writing, but English is not my native language.
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10/10 but I'm probably gonna mess up with ATG lore/world lelI recommend that you read the cultivation / nen info so the chapters are easier to understandshameless meshameless meshameless meshameless meshameless meshameless me
The grammar makes me want to die. Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!! It’s so bad!!! Arghhhh!!! I’ve lost one million brain cells and I’m a potato!
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Hmmmmm!. The novel is gathering paces now. Right from intimation no. 4 to intimation no. 34 which led to many commotions, Valmon Dain is regarded as a ghost capable of knowing everything about the law breakers in entire London. Now officer Delbury and Shaughnessy began to act on every of his intimation which led to the captured of Willard Lyall's goons but to the puzzlement of Lyall, Tansy later discovered Valmon Dain to be none other than the man behind their misfortune. Whereas for them to be safe, they need to eliminate Dain but that turns out to be a suicide Mission for Willard Lyall. Despite all of Dain's persuasion, Willard Lyall wouldn't listen and section pull the trigger.
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I just finished reading the 40 chapters, and I have to say it's pretty good. If I have to nitpick It would be about the info dumb. Very recommended, and I hope it gets picked up.