SamuelOkun
Started of good, now has gone downhill. Too many fillers 3-4 chapters worth (mostly back and forth between characters with the story not moving forward or anywhere.) For the first time I'm dropping a novel. It had potential but MC became OP too fast and the author became greedy. In my opinion it's not worth spending the spirit stones and if you have subscription its not worth wasting time when you can read other good novels
You already know the end of the book but the author gives up before writing the ending. That's the sad fate of a plagiarized work, the farthest I've ever seen is the sixth generation of plagiarism. Generally the original story didn't do well either. It just showed a new strategy of being lazy in writing.
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oye author why aren't you updating your other novel .if you drop it then just told us you drop it or continue latte on
a good enough story, such a pity it wasn't chosena good enough story, such a pity it wasn't chosena good enough story, such a pity it wasn't chosen
The story is extremely basic and a pure rip off of “Shadow Hack”. Writing quality is far below average and the characters are as basic as it gets. Tbh a wooden plank would’ve made a better MC. World background is never expanded on greatly. The grammar is so bad I genuinely thought I was having a stroke while reading. Getting shot in the head might’ve been a better experience than reading this trash. If I could give negative stars I would.It’s a solid -3/5 stars, if you have nothing to do on a Saturday evening I still suggest not reading this absolute waste of time
This fanfic is awesome!!! But please don'tlet kanzaki steal nagisa!! my dear kayano will cry!waiting for the next chapter! This is super amazing><
nice book. i like the ending but man thats bitter. ??
must read story (the story development and characters are great except Samantha she is fking annoying but this is the only thing I hate about the story all the other things are really good and the grammar is okay not perfect but good enough really master piece to me )
Nosensical trash, it looked promising but theres just so much stuff that dont make sense. Dont waste your time on this novel.
I like a MC that goes around killing people, but he should have a decent reason, in this story The MC kills people on a whim that dind’t do anything to him, moreover he Is completely hypocritical, blaming others for thing he is the first to do.It would made sense if he was born in a devious place and he can’t distinguish right from wrong, but he had a loving mother and teacher, and he was already an ***** when he came in this world. He knows perfectly right from wrong, he simply is just a shallow character that only cares about power and goes around killing people on a whim. And he is so cliché, he’s like the villain of too many stories, the baddies that what more power because he want’s more power and is evil because he’s evil without and proper reason. I hope that everybody knows that power, as much as money, it’s just a means, not the final aim, and reading about a MC that wants power without any other aim it’s quite boring. And again I would like and accept if there was a psychological growth, but fro. The beginning to the end he is the same.
Very interesting book, more updated author ...
