Azathoth2etZ
Absolutely amazing, I love the synopsis of the book. I also love the characters. Looking forward to reading more In the future.........................
I tried to give it a chance despite the bad reviews since the concept looks great and it was the author's first novel. Sadly the story was suck despite the great concept the author had. There are too many questionable decision made by MC that against common sense of what people should've done. MC only pick 2 skills out of 5 free chances then rushed out to hunt. I mean sure there are people who like to be careful before picked out what path they want to take, if you know you want to go out to hunt of course you would take 1 of the weapon skill and the detection skil, but wtf happened in your brain if you didnt learn the Ai skill when you know nothing about the new world ? Its funny how MC immediately got angry when opening the chest bcs he assumed it was only the strength potion without checking it out first, when MC literally only know like 1% of the new world, instead of checking out what it was MC instead assumed based on his little knowledge. Even if the author introduced the MC as a pampered son for the MC forgot to turn off his hidden stats doesnt make sense unless he is dumb. You clearly already told that any lucky encounter would cost you the luck stat, and it would only regen 1 per 2 weeks, how the **** you forgot to turn it off as if it wasn't important enough to remember. I stop reading right after a random girl showed up and tried to kill the MC but ended up becoming his woman, like who t f think that it was natural ?
Has potential, hopefully i can rerate better after some more chapters pop up. Keep up the work and ill read it monthly (or quicker if alot of chapters pop up ) Also thos 140 character post min is annoying.
Great story, please don't drop.
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Writing at the start is rough , really rough. Stuck through it as there are edits here and there that hint at better writing to come. What killed it for me though was the character progression. Just jumps all over thr place and really killed the enjoyment for me. I really wanted to like this book as the premise seems great but the execution really doesn’t make this worth reading. And certainly not worth using stones on.
What captivated me in this story is the title itself. When I first read the first chapters, it was interesting and it hooked me until I realized that I kept scrolling and scrolling. Overall, I'm looking forward to development of this story. This is a must read! ??
This kind of writing quality is completely out of place on this site, I'm pretty sure it's against the rules or something. The story is very detailed and relatively slow-paced, yet it doesn't feel boring at all. For some reason even the characters behave reasonably and very believably, almost like real people. This novel should be way more popular, but it just had to have a cover art, that looks like 90s computer graphics, so there's no way around it.
So far so good!!! it’s unique I think I’m in chapter 13 or somewhere between chapter 10 -15 well anyway I just learned how to play volleyball or actually learn about volleyball so yeah far so good
Reading this is a chore. The author describe every unnecessary details, it's tiring. The plot and idea is decent, but the execution is poor.
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I don't know if this is good or not but the writing quality is good! I realize it's a short novel 900 chapters. I don't know how good this novel is or how far it'll go.
But if you're in it purely for the
Great story all around the MC is a bit hesitant of a guy for his personality though. Other than that not many complaints and I approve this as a good read to spend your time on.
