Story is decent and it's a nice read if you're bored - However the translation is so fucking awfull, it's in badly need of an editor.
On another note, more and more stories on Qidian is really lacking editors, many of the stories are pretty much so badly mawed by the translator that it's impossible to read - This one/others Qidian is dropped until and editor comes along.
I was really enjoying this novel at the beginning. The mc was not swayed by beauty and while it is expected that love interests would come along, the way the character developed is terrible.
Every female that is stronger than him plays with him like he is a toy. He has not backbone, helps women who scheme against him, and just caves in to anything females want. He forgives females pretty much instantly, while a male would get the most humiliating treatment.
If you are looking to read a novel with one of the biggest simps on this platform, this is for you. Otherwise, avoid this like the plague. This review is at chapter 188.
good novel keep it up
Website : qidian china
Views : 680thousand
Rating : 8.4(69)
Chapters : 747
Status : completed
Word count : 2.4million
author level : lv5
No of works : 5
Year : 2016
If you are interested, my reviews are in almost every novel with atleast 3 likes.
I'll keep it short, the author is either a troll or has nil experience in all the tags on this story. This story is logic-free and every single detail in it is worthy of a bucket of cringe.Mc character: idiotic. Game mechanics: wacky at best. World building: kindergarten-level imagination. Plot: Don't know. My braincells lost weight after reading though. Read at your own risk.I really wanted to like the story but i failed. I wish you good luck in that endeavor!
Another novel with the same old plot, get every1 inside a VRMMO, make the protagonist be a nobody then send him back in time, still waiting for a novel where the protagonist will be someone great without having knowledge of the future...
Anyway with no romance/cute interactions and no life outside the gaming world, this feels like a cultivation novel where the MC cultivates for 1000 years and we read 10k chapters of the same thing happening over and over again, plot isn't very interesting either so...
Well written but excruciatingly uninteresting. As usual this novel is very generic and doesn't even attempt to distinguish itself from every other simulator novel out there but that isn't my biggest gripe with this.
Ever since the MC simulated the life where he writes a novel, everything feels incredibly bloated, boring and unnecessarily detailed. I don't mind the whole novel writing gimmick, what I do mind is that you could have condensed all of that nonsense into 3 chapters easily.
I for the first time ever in a trial read very quickly skimmed through most of it but unsurprisingly lost none of the essence of what happened. This novel's unjustifiably enormous self indulgence is baffling and just ruined whatever little it had going for it. 0.25/5.
In the first work, the author's story died due to a critical error, which he was not even going to correct.
In the second work, the author's pen has changed, it looks more like a swamp and a routine, a lot of unnecessary information in which you drown, not understanding why you are reading this.
In the third work, he becomes Chinese, if you are at least a little familiar with Chinese works, literally from the first chapter and passages you can understand where this will lead.
I want to note that Chinese authors are extremely hardworking and creative.
However, this cannot overshadow their main shortcomings.
Nationalism, which does not seem to be in this work.
But 100%, there will be a lot of water here.
I also want to say that the Chinese have not been able to create an OP character for 500 chapters.
They have a mania for limiting the growth of their characters through various shenanigans.
In the previous 2 works, the author limited the growth of MK, even despite all the cheats that were in MK.
I strongly doubt that the author will be able to raise this story, with his passion to limit the speed of ms and write 5 chapters of dubious information, instead of an adequate and understandable 1 chapter.
I wish this story good luck, perseverance and more intelligence.
Pls dont drop the novel :)......................................................................and more update :).......................................
I'm totally in love with this one. Great plot and amazing writing style. The development is smooth, the characters are absolutely great. Great work author.
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Its an amazing description. But how the mc's mind actually work is confusing. Idk if its from the translation or its just the way it is but it gives disappointment. I hope as the story builds up, it improves.