the writing us definitely off, or maybe it's the translation. it's not really that good and the story doesn't flow well. it's hard to tell who's who and the dialogue isn't the best
did webnovel releasing same novels with minor changes... I remember reading same plot novel before... anyway... it's not interesting to me, it's the same novel as before just changing names and did some minor changes... I am still waiting the novel name with ' I am spokesperson of grim reaper' which also have revenge plot like this...
5 star coz it's been a while since i saw a novel with no lock chapters.❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
I personally like monster evolution stories and this looks like a book people who read fantasy will enjoy. Overall a good book with average writing quality, consistent updates and an mc who has an actual personality and does not just go around mindlessly becoming stronger.
Frankly, it's hard to say ntr, but there's definitely cheating. Ntr usually has sexual intercourse and stealing. Here, Kyle and Helia have been in a relationship for a while. There was no sexual intercourse between them. But there was flirting, kissing and hugging. This is cheating no matter which country's culture and law you look at. The author wrote it well, not as disturbing as ntr novels but still not for me. Cheating is one of my most hated mistakes. In cheating, reasons are just excuses. She was alone, weak, in a difficult situation. These are just excuses to console yourself. Helia admits that she loved Kyle too, when she was about to die. Of course, we can have feelings for more than one person in life. However, this is not an excuse to cheat. If there was a reverse harem or open relationship, it would be more acceptable to me. But cheating is taboo for me. Of course, we should not blame only Helia. Arial himself cheated on Helia. That's why this relationship felt so weak. I don't like drama too much. The novel itself is good. The writing style of the author is very good. However, this novel is not for me. For me, the most important elements in the novel are; plots and relationships. That's why I wasn't too attached to this novel. However, the author did a good job. I would recommend reading it to anyone who is not bothered by it.
We need more !! we need mass chapter !! 7/week not enough !! spirit stone? power stone? if this novel not make me bored.. i will give it all to you~ now i waiting.....for...more.... chapter.....
He should change the name to the sage of cooking because thats seems to be the main topic of this novel atleast in the first 70 chapter that is. There is too much in this novel that doesnt matter ... Im fine with side stories but every chapter feels like one
Honestly just sounds like A Valiant Life by Xin Feng. Synopsis sounds really similar to that direction. Lin Fan better get patented by Xin Feng
I took my time to finally read it, as I said I would before.
Well, take this review with a grain of salt since I'm someone who doesn't like harem stories.
Yes, my first issue is with the 'all girls are falling for MC' problem. That truly irritates me, but some people might like it.
What about the mc's previous life friends? So far, only five years passed on Earth, right? How come only women keep appearing? Other than you typical villain men, the mc doesn't have a single friend of the same genre. It's all women, women, and more women. Is that even possible? At the very least, that was the case until the chapter I stopped reading.
What about his real wife? Like, she is happy he came back... but that is all she feels... It's like she simply doesn't care at all about what happened in the last five years he was gone. It's all 'I'm happy he is back.' 'everything will be fine now that he is back' those are basically the only thoughts in her head. I thought she was supposed to be a much stronger woman after living the challenges of raising a kid five years alone. Suddenly, she became a broken doll out of nowhere.
Last but not least, the descriptions. I truly can't emphasize with overly descriptive stories. I don't need to know how beautiful or run-down a place is to its minimal details. All I need to know is that it looks bad or good. Unless the description of a place or things like that is necessary for the story itself, all those detail are completely meaningless. I literally jumped at least 30 to 40% of the paragraphs in the chapters I read because I already knew that it was all a bunch of unnecessary words. I want to read a story, not an architecture project. Give, me, a, story!
Of course, there were good points in the story too:
Writing quality. It is definitely much better than my own books. Hahaha! I have nothing to complain in this department.
Updates are fine too. They are consistent as far as I can see. This is definitely the point of a good author.
The story itself had potential, at least when I read the synopsis. It really caught my eye... until the problems I mentioned appeared.
PS: This last part is basically a personal taste. It has nothing to do with the author or the story. Anyway, the thing about Chinese names everywhere, including the cultivation world the MC came from. I mean, come on! What are the chances that the guy was Chinese and everyone in his world were all Chinese? The chances are ridiculously low, but that's exactly what happens. Remember, chances wise, that shouldn't be the case at all. As I said, this is just a personal taste. It has nothing to do with the story. If the author wishes that every single stone has a Chinese origin, it is fine.
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Since we're about 28 chapters in so far, I think I should clarify up some things. This story is going to be one of those stories where you will either love or hate it.
Reasons why you might like it:
- Mc (Ronald) is heavily misunderstood
- Heroines are completely devoted to the mc
- Heroines prioritizes the mc's well-being (which is where the misunderstanding comes in)
- Mc is OP (although it will rarely be showed throughout the story)
Reasons why you might hate it:
- Mc is oblivious to everything
- Mc mentally suffers
- Mc doesn't have his own free will (because of the system) during the plot he reenacts.
Obviously, the reasons that might make you hate this book stated above will be learnt by Ronald SLOWLY overtime, however it has been undecided when he'll completely realize this as the time of making this review, so if you plan on reading this book, don't come in expecting his problems to be solved for awhile.
With that being said, read at your own caution and enjoy!
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