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So far this book is a good read but please check your chapter placement you went form a boss fight to repet chapters. This make the store fall flat on it head.
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i want you to keep writing it. its a freaking masterpiece. when i heard it got axed i felt really sad so can you please continue writing it.
Its better than other novels, just not by much. I find the MC obnoxious and his actions dont really make much sense. Theres quite a few tropes in this novel that i personally find extremely obnoxious, i.e MC goes nuts for random girl #7, the world building is alright, but nothing to fawn over, and the English is confusing but not hard to read. Overall its average, but as the author stated, this is their first novel so its to be expected. Pretty good for a first novel. Though, I will be dropping it because of the tropes. I personally cant stand them.
Great stuff, i enjoyed the story and the main character, so far I've read quite a few chapters, and I can definitely say I look forward to reading more. Keep up the good work!
I will read more later - but I just have to say I appreciate that someone would also think of the "collateral damage" that comes along with great and heroic plots...it's not like you can make an omelette without breaking some eggs, but I laughed. Then I felt kinda guilty, since hey, anyone could end up as collateral damage in a novel. Then I laughed more, because the ideas and the sheer absurdity of these situations are legit hilarious.
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It is currently the tenth chapter. The story has been good so far, but the start was a little confusing, atleast for me. I think that this will turn out to be a good novel in this genre. The fact that this is in my opinion a promising novel is simply because of the family dynamic, most novels don't have this kind of family thing going on for them, at most the mc will be dating someone and that is in my opinion really boring.in short: A really promising novel, that has a great family dynamic.And author pls update the novel!!!!!
An excellent story, though some grammatical error here and there, I believe the author is improving.