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it's amazing...you won't even realised which chapter you are reading coz u I'll be so absorbed in the novel....I have only one issue, PLEASE DON'T MAKE IT INTO HAREM. Love should be Monogamous
I'm loving this story at the moment the world is great and sucks you in story development is good quality is up there for WN all around i think this is a 4/5.
Sasuke
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I don't know why suddenly this novel is gathering haters. This novel consists of normal cliche scenarios of gaining system, invading of other worlds but the way author presents it is pretty good. There are no arrogant young masters except one or 2 martial artists who are jealous of MC. There is no romance yet till chap 366 and i guess author will keep it that way. MC has to struggle initially to get resources by fighting in other world but as he gets stronger everything becomes easy. Fights are interesting but they don't drag for many chapters. Translation is mediocre. But this story is worth a try. Many reviews are just baseless, only to get exp as they haven't even read 50 chapters
although the story is not perfect it is still
far better than other novels on this platform i dont mind the typo errors or grammatical mistakes as long as story is good i just hope the author will update soon
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The storyline is stable and the plot is intriguing. The characters have their own personalities and most importantly it is balanced in its execution.
Honestly this(☝️) is the point that most authors forget the most :-
1) It is okay even if the storyline is not unique.
2)There is no need for a excessively large world where as the maps continue to grow endlessly as the characters develop.
3) There is no need for excessive plot armour to make it convenient for the MC. Similarly there is no need for excessively vile and powerful enemies who rob everything important from the MC.
The details are done beautifully and systematically. This can be considered as one of the best novels.
Keep it up author, I want this story in my library for a long time to come
So far this looks to be a interesting story, the MC seems to be pissed about his whole problem not caring that he is the cause of the problem. It should be interesting to see where the writer goes with this.
This is an interesting story that is certainly worth your time. The world building is solid with mechanics and rules that help flesh out the tale. The main MC is a cool guy too.
I did notice a few grammar errors but they don't really break the flow of your reading so it's no big issue. As an action-adventure tale, I give this novel the two-thumbs up and recommend it.
Keep up the good work, author. :)
This is the “Transmigrated to become NPC sand take advantage of players genre”For similar works-The Legendary Mechanic (Sci-fi World)I am a Legendary Boss (Western Fantasy World)And lastly this novel (Xianxia World)Yay. I feel like this genre gets views off of how so many people can relate to being a gamer and getting scammed (or at least it feels like) by NPCs. There’s a similar genre for getting scammed by game creator.
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