Volume 1 is undergoing a revision or rewrite. I have to heavily edit some mistakes and inconsistent points I've written. I'll update it sometime at October.
I see there is an already mixed reception. Hmm well I guess horror ain't for everyone or it could be my writing, but I believe I have crafted something decent
Nice start. Perhaps we have the same interests. However, I hope yours wouldn't be satirical, pessimistic and sarcastic as mine (intentional on my part). So far I have yet to see a deeper characterization in your novel, although I am asking too much for a novel that just started. I wonder how this novel would distinguish itself from mine. Good luck and more power to your novel!
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From now on i'm writing the novel slower because i've seen my quality of my work it sucks balls.................................!!!!!!!!!@!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Autor here:
To all experienced readers, please be gentle.
I hope you will enjoy the story, regardless of my writing.
For now, I've released 10 chapters, while having another few as backup, but before I work on them, I would like to know your thoughts.
Unfortunately, editing all of my mistakes and polishing takes me several times longer than writing. So releases might be slow, especially because I have a full-time job other than writing. But the end of whining, have fun!
So far I like it, but like many of those New novels the update of chapters is a little slow. But it have a good backgroud, and the MC is op but not too much
The Sypnosis is one good one! (prologue as well.)
Grammer mistake is low and the storyline is awesome!
Excellent and superb!
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As a fellow author it pains me to see that you have so many grammatical errors in your synopsis. Please get yourself a software to fix those mistakes
Don't purchase privilege as the translator hold end of month dump for after the 1st. 31st is today and one chapter 12 days ago then one chapter 6 days ago uploaded then nothing until after the first.
The story is pretty good but it's annoying how a mere human being called god and mc who kneel in front of strong women, even though she hasn't done anything to him.
Details
Short Title:OTSIMAlternate Title:一键修炼系统瞬间百万级Status:OngoingAuthor:D catCountry:ChinaType:Web NovelGenre:
Action, Adventure, Fantasy, Martial Arts, Xuanhuan
Weekly Rank:#45Monthly Rank:#47All Time Rank:#25Tags:Arrogant Characters, Artifact Crafting, Cheats, Crafting, Cultivation, Dao Comprehension, Fast Cultivation, Harem, Money Grubber, System, Transmigration, Urban, Weak to Strong,