I think this novel was on gravity tales and had more than a hundred or two hundred chapters already. Anyway, this novel has all the cliches I find annoying in Chinese novels.
The novel has a mc who becomes a *** crazed maniac in less than 100 chapters, he has Captain America level of powers in normal earth, kills people for whatever reason(Some delinquents were harassing a harem member. He wanted to teach them a lesson and ended up breaking someone's bone. He felt like it would cause trouble to him so he just killed them all instead. The guys didn't want to kill him or anything, they were just perverts verbally harassing a girl...)
This story is pointlessly nationalistic(Author mentions China superiority in places nobody really cares) and author doesn't know about foreign countries that much, so every foreigner is a stereotype. All mexicans are drug gangs here, American girls are really "open", The only Russian is Zangief with a gun, Author even made the Brazilian guy play Samba as wedding music... He was really forcing stereotypes down everyone's throat.
Anyway I dropped the novel when we were getting like 5 whole chapters about the process MC mating with harem member N.34. Oh Yeah author has a fetish with Netori, two of potential girls in the real world are already taken.(One is married, the other has a boyfriend. I quit around the chapter MC was mating in secret in front of the boyfriend.)
This novel has every bad cliche I know, even face slapping bs. No creative novels this batch with maybe the "dominating the pugilistic world" one. The rest is all copy and paste of successful genres we have all read a thousand times.
Racist garbage that had already been translated up to a few hundred chapters previously, so it isn't even "new". This is one of those chinese novels that panders to their hatred of anything "western" and cultures outside of their own. It flaunts it in nearly every chapter later on, almost like the author is trying to over compensate for something really.
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It's good to see an anthology amongst a sea of really long novels. The author keeps the stories crisp and short. The 1st story shows that there is a reason its called glamor, peeps. Good work.
I need more chapters, I find it very entertaining, I am tired of reading reincarnated novels that always start the same, at least this one does not put so much filler and the history of the secondary characters are short but enough for a convincing description.
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Just the title alone is interesting and I'm expecting lots of incredible moments in this one. The book may lack chaps as of the moment, making the world background and story progression somewhat unclear, but I'm confident enough to say that this book will end up great, considering the author's skill with his craft. I'll leave this here to tell future readers not to miss this one.
This Story is way to underrated in my personal opinion.The Story is deep and complex, the world backround the same, but hes always the same startingpoint (until around ch 800). When u wanna nitpick about the story itself, it is that alle the "human" fall very fast into Depravity, insanity etc.Now about the MC:Well the MC is actually a pretty nice guy but very cautious and selfish. But with every Setback, and trap he gets in he gets colder and more ruthless. But here is the point which makes the story and the MC very likable or hateable for the readers. Because the MC just doesnt learn...He gets his obsession that he is Human and when every Human falls into depravity he holds himself as "law abiding" "ordinary" etcAnd still he doesnt learn...He still is dumb enough to get in avery fkin trap, helps ppl that betray him later etc. And he gets more cold and ruthless-And he still doesnt learn...And the story more or less repeats itself how MC does his thinks, except that he gets more cold and ruthless, and he ignores more plight of others, but becaus of that he gets trampled over and over again.You might think now, that such a stupid MC is not worth reading over. And Yes you are "half right". The Ingenuity of the whole story is about to find out why such idiot was chosen, trapped, betrayed over and over again. Why does he stay that stupidly stubborn about staying "human" when he destroy one life after another, or later city after city.In my Eyes, the story is about how to strip his layers of Hope, humanity, emotions, confidence in such a way that he doesnt get, that his tsundere hero charakter is getting reversed step by step! But his naive and stupid obsessions are actually the one point that lets him stay as (anti)hero charakter without him noticing.the question now is, was he because of that chosen or was that unplanned and thats why no one can really defeat him^^This story is fun because exactly that, it seems every step the mc does is planned, even his wins and loses, but is it really?^^ I dont know and thats why i keep reading
First arrival Behold you mortals (evil laugh)(evil laugh)hahhahhahahahaahhahahahahahahahaha???????????????
This novel is fantastic cant wait for there to be much much more