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Recommended by my favorite author and she's right the storyline is intact with action and thrill. I like how the way the author bring his storyline into a kind of novel that has the touch of anime world. Good luck dear author!
Well... the story at the end is the author's and I respect his decisions, it's well written and all, but it's more of the same with a bit of a cliche. My personal opinion, I miss adversity, the feeling of irreverence. in the end I like stories that involve power, POWER, BATTLES, the feeling like "I'm going to destroy the Gods".
the love plot
bleh
mc got tied to a girl barely introduced to history since the first chapter.
Hello, Deathilim here. I'm gonna be shameless as heck but I'm gonna put my review on five stars. Well, that aside this is my first ever written story! I've been interested in The Novel's Extra's concept and planned to make one of my own. Except, this is not plot driven for the most part but character driven.
I put more emphasis on the main characters rather than the overall plot, however, there's still plot. Just don't expect it to be grander or over the top amazing!
Writing Quality — I know some eenglish here and there, but not a native english speaker. Please pardon my mistakes in writing.
Story Development — The start will be neither fast not slow, atleast that is what i envision. I will lay out the important things at the first few ten chapters and then you shan't worry about the pacing.
Character Design — Eh, most of my characters are inspired by many different novels. But the main character is an empty vessel, his character at it's core is empty.
Updating Stability — I will update atleast 1 chapter a day, if I don't, I will upload 2 chapters next day.
World Background — Pretty, uh, mediocre? This is a magical world set in a modern futuristic setting. Earth, of the future has converged all of it's continent forming the “Pangea” or supercontinent. There will be other races too!
Well, that's all for the most part! Thank you, please leave a comment and criticize this work of mine.
Hello, Dear author I'm just wondering if there will be updates in the future because I just keep coming back, checking if there any updates after i finished reading the others cringe novels.
I was immediately got hook in the prologue of a crazy general who wants constant war, to the mysteries cultivation trait of the MC and his demon body, and the cliffhanger in the latest chapters. I mean come on I can't just forget this one I keep coming back to check for any updates every time remember!! hhaaa
It was good until you started trying to make him a "good" person when I was looking for a mc the destroys everything and then I tried to push on but...it was to much when you dropped a baby on the 10 year old mc's lap forcing him to take care of it...which he does(because it looks like his sisters)...
Hello, my fellow Taoist. It's me, the author. ( sound stupid, but the humor was acceptable.)
Some asked about genre development, but I'm a newbie, and please accept some mistakes. As the stories still needed to be improved, I'm gladly open to suggestions. Thanks for passing by.
I came here right after watching the anime, and what can I say? This mesmerized me in such a level, I'm absolutely in love with this creation. The novel gives more depth to the history, I highly recommend reading it and appreciate every sentence of this magnificent work
The story has a lot of potential and I must say I enjoyed reading the first few chapters. Keep up the good work. I really enjoyed your novel I hope you continue this wonderful novel until the end
It's a pretty interesting novel, give a chance! Oh I also posted this review just for the daily exp! But i was serious about the novel.
Have a great day!
(now I'll just start to type some dots to get the minimum 140 characters,so you should stop read this!)
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I’m excited to read the next installment of Bofuri. I wonder if this character is related to Maple or at least read the manga, because that would make this novel even cooler!