KiritoK5
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please keep updating this story is amazing.
I can't stop reading, great characters and very original story.
The writing quality (especially during the x-rated scenes) is superb. What really got me into the story was the way the author was able to describe how the MC did certain things and solve certain issues. Just hope he creates personal countermeatures for the system just in case things don't go as planned. Putting too much trust in an A.i-system always have backlashes in the end if one doesn't tread carefully. Considering he has his knowledge from Earth, he should be more cautious.
I also wonder if he'll be able to return to his home Earth, and find out the real reasons or circumstances that ended in his favor. If he's living in an actual VR-game - will players start popping up in the later sequence of the story? And if they do, will he find an actual "player-version" of his trueself? And if a player-version of his trueself appears, will he be able to identify him and also merge with this playerself; thus, being able to control two bodies simultaneuosly in difference dimensions? Will he be able to bring items from the game into the real world using his game abilities? Will his game knowledge allow him to conquer the world and terraform other planets using fictional & unbelievable technology? Is he technically in a different timeline? Is his present circumstance an anomoly?
This is what makes the story interesting. Because you can create your own speculations and it can ignite a flame into the story.
It's very fast paced. And you can tell the author enjoys writing his story as well. YOU HAVE MY FULL SUPPORT.
Interesting start. I am curious about the mysterious girl's identity.
A lot of worldbuilding can be seen, the author also did a good job in depicting the cruelty of war.
The only thing I would like to point out is that dialogue tags are overused at times, but it improves in the later chapters.
Overall, great job!
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one of the best novels you've made. Good mystery. Good action. Everything is just good overall wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
I have been eyeing your novels from more than a year but since they were harem and I recently came across the platform, I didn't read them. Since you said this one is a no harem and sinlge FL, friendship to slowly romance. I am going to take your word for it along with the amazing start. Also, thanks for the FP from the event.
A blatant, worse version of "I'm Actually a Cultivation Bigshot". Everyone's an idiot, before MC evey girl is willing to just drop their panties, and MC is just so "unbelievably cool" when in reality, he's just ignorant.
i am giving it a 5 not because it's great, but because the reviews are overly harsh. As far as the "I'm Actually a Cultivaiton Bigshot" copies go, this is my favorite one, and I've read (and dropped) 4 others.
I have caught up to the latest chapter, and so far, so good. This book is dope, legit lit. it has the modern fantasy and sci-fi vibe in it, and also, the story is very descriptive. Long story short, I want more.
Love love love this book! Love how the story is developing slowly and you never know what's gonna happen next. Excited to see what happens next to mc and his wife and all of their friends!!! Nice job author
